帮忙润色一下这篇英语演讲稿，使它更口语化，更幽默
Let me show you a photo album,which records the footprint of my life.It means a lot to me. This is my mother who looks like carved out from the same mold with me.My friends who have read it all surprised at that, it is a photo when she was young .Now,she is crszy about Korean dramas ,she can be watching it a whole day even forget to cook. These are some of my travelling photos,this is me and my girlfriends to imitate the shape of the Titanic in Pearl River, Guangzhou,also,she is my best friend,we struggle together in the entrance examination period. This alhe bum is full of my memory ,one of the most precious things to me.I will treasure it all the time. 写相册的话妈妈的那部分可以少些一点，在加一些其他亲人的照片描述一下，就是语法错误有点多
英语演讲稿帮忙润色一下，这真的对我很重要，紧急。
感激不尽。
When I was a schoolchild, my dream was to be a engineer. However , when I told parents my ambition, they thought it was ridiculous and said that engineer is not suitable for a girl, which made me very angry. I argued with them and said I would follow my dream to do what I really liked and they didn't need to worry about my future. A few days later, my teacher told me that there was going to be a math competition and I should prepare for it with my father’s guidance. I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time .Suddenly I realized I had told my parents that I din’t need any help from them. I had to make a hard choice that I would either break my promise and ask them for help, or prepare for the competition by myself. I burst into tears. I don’t want to lose my face to ask for their help, though I knew that the competition was really important to me. The reason why I didn't do so was that not only would it lose my face but also they would never take my opinions seriously. So I chose to meet the challenge by myself. Every time I came across the difficult problems, I was helpless and din’t know who I can turn to. But I made up my mind not to give up. I devoted all my time and energy to do exercises and give up all the parties. Finally I came first in the contest. All my devotions were paid off.I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time不明白此句要表达什么意识not only
急求润色改正一片英语演讲稿!!!
Maybe that beggar is a real cheat, but one who gives would only lose a Nickle.Yet if Otherwise, that one might lose the LIFE.Then which one is more important?Good Language is For Good, and For God.I admire your GOOD English,really; and you being the master.GOOD LUCK
我的一篇英语演讲稿，帮我润色润色，看看二分半到三分时间，够不够长
长度差不多了，结构也可以，但是感觉逻辑有点乱，举例子的时候最好结合递进的观点，一层层的说出来比较好。
不要把例子一下子丢出来。
记住，举例，是为了说明观点的，每个 观点我觉得有一两个例子说明就可以了。
例子的类型也不要重复，要各具有不同的代表性。
希望你成功~
请英语大神帮忙改，润色一下这篇演讲稿，我打算讲新西兰总理约翰基。
好的，好的。
