我润色一下这篇演讲稿
Playing basketball is one of my hobbies.It has been my favorite sport for several years. Initally, it can help me keep fit.It is also good for the growth of my frame.Secondly,it can help me learn the way to cooperate with others.In modern society,teamwork is even more important than individual ability.What's more,it can train my react capability, which can help me in studying。
Moreover, it can reduce the pressure of studying.Reading is my another hobby.When I'm tired or bored,I start to read books .Reading leads me to a world without the limits of time and space.It can take me to anywhere I want to vist such as the black holes and ancient Egypt.It can also teach me a lot.Most of my knowledge is acquired from books. In addition,I can even chat with giants and learn their thoughts on philosophy,science and so forth.Furthermore,I can get the power to go on studying by reading.Playing basketball and reading have been parts of my life.I'll never forget to do them.
求大侠帮忙润色一下演讲稿
Maybe that beggar is a real cheat, but one who gives would only lose a Nickle.Yet if Otherwise, that one might lose the LIFE.Then which one is more important?Good Language is For Good, and For God.I admire your GOOD English,really; and you being the master.GOOD LUCK
英语演讲稿帮忙润色一下，这真的对我很重要，紧急。
感激不尽。
When I was a schoolchild, my dream was to be a engineer. However , when I told parents my ambition, they thought it was ridiculous and said that engineer is not suitable for a girl, which made me very angry. I argued with them and said I would follow my dream to do what I really liked and they didn't need to worry about my future. A few days later, my teacher told me that there was going to be a math competition and I should prepare for it with my father’s guidance. I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time .Suddenly I realized I had told my parents that I din’t need any help from them. I had to make a hard choice that I would either break my promise and ask them for help, or prepare for the competition by myself. I burst into tears. I don’t want to lose my face to ask for their help, though I knew that the competition was really important to me. The reason why I didn't do so was that not only would it lose my face but also they would never take my opinions seriously. So I chose to meet the challenge by myself. Every time I came across the difficult problems, I was helpless and din’t know who I can turn to. But I made up my mind not to give up. I devoted all my time and energy to do exercises and give up all the parties. Finally I came first in the contest. All my devotions were paid off.I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time不明白此句要表达什么意识not only
