
写四级英语作文的万能句子,框架,多用词组,多用名人名言
Recently the ...has been brought into focus by public近期...(某一个问题)已经被大众开始关注In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives,在这一篇论文中,我目标于探究这个复杂现象的不同方面identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures.识别相关的导致这个问题的因素并且提出一些有效的方法开头万能公式:1. 开头万能公式一:名人名言有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办
尤其是英语名言
”,很好办:编
原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦
而且没准将来我们就是名人呢
对吧
经典句型:a proberb says, “ you are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)it goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:as everyone knows, no one can deny that…2. 开头万能公式二:数字统计原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。
原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。
所以不妨试用下面的句型:according to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造:honesty根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。
travel by bike根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。
youth根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。
five-day work week better than six-day work?根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。
更多句型:a recent statistics shows that …阅卷老师在语言方面主要从两个方面进行评判: 1、基本正确 四、六级考生的最大问题不是写得太简单,而是严重错误太多。
基础一般的同学即使使用小学或中学词汇和句型,只要使用得基本正确,也可以得到及格分数。
考生最常犯的语言错误有三类:语法、拼写、标点。
最常犯的语法错误包括:时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。
2、丰富多变 基础较好的同学,要想取得四、六级写作高分,应做到丰富多变。
丰富多变体现在词汇和句型两方面。
同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好不要重复出现,应尽量使用同、近义词替换(无法替换的关键词除外)。
例如:think可以替换为reckon, assume, argue等词。
如果想不到同、近义词,可以使用上义词进行替换。
此外,句型也应富于变化,不要拘泥于主谓宾句型,可以使用主系表、过去分词和现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。
四级作文如果量化成句数,只需写10句左右;六级只需12句左右。
全文应以短句为主,长短句相结合。
所谓短句是指10个词左右的句子,不能全篇都是5、6个词的短句。
同时,全文应有一定数量的长句,一般15~20词即可,太长则易冗赘。
有的同学以为只写长句不写短句,就能取得高分,实际上老师看长句会觉得很累,以为你不会写短句,通常不会给高分。
如果一篇中文作文每句都30多个字,定然晦涩难懂,英文也不例外。
精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调;复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。
二、高 分 真 经 (一)背诵 背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝,可分为以下5个层次:(1)精彩词汇,(2)精彩句型,(3)精彩句子,(4)万能框架,(5)经典范文。
注意句子和句型不一样,精彩句子应作为单词来记忆。
背诵前,确保自己已充分理解所有内容。
语言学习有两个关键词——输入(INPUT)和输出(OUTPUT)。
听力和阅读属于输入,考生处于被动状态,只需在考场上将听到和看到的东西弄懂。
应对这种题目的技巧很多,容易在短期内提高。
但口语和写作属于输出,考生必须变被动为主动,这很难在短期内突破。
没有大量的输入,很难进行自由输出。
四、六级写作需要在30分钟内完成一篇短文,共计120或150余字,很多同学叫苦不迭。
但若将其改为中文作文,大家就会觉得易如反掌。
原因何在
俗话说:“熟读唐诗三百首,不会做诗也能吟。
”同学们从小到大背诵了大量中文佳作,可以随意组合,自由输出。
然而,在英语学习中,多数同学只沉溺于背单词、抠语法、做阅读,很少有人背诵英文文章。
正因为没有大量输入,写作才始终处于“挤牙膏”状态,想一句说一句,说一句翻译一句。
提高英语写作要多读、多背、多写、多改。
多读、多背是首要任务,是积累输入的关键。
考生应大量积累经典英文句型、表达和范文,平时勤于背诵。
有的同学问我,说自己背过很多英文文章,但上了考场还是大脑一片空白,什么都想不起来。
这种情况很常见,主要有两个原因:一是没有进行造句的工作,只是盲目背诵。
二是背得不够熟练。
学习任何东西都讲究先求质,再求量。
大家英语学了很多年,文章看了很多,为什么写作还是学不好
关键是量铺开了,但质没有上去。
一篇文章应背到脱口而出的程度,如果还需要过脑子,就证明背得不够熟练。
一知半解,背得再多也是徒劳。
(二)默写 背完经典范文后,进行默写。
然后对照原文纠错,搞清楚错在什么地方。
多数同学在写的时候都会犯小错误,如拼写、单复数、大小写等。
这些就是你在写作中的弱点,也是阅卷老师最不能容忍的地方。
培根说过:“Writing makes an exact man.”(写作使人精确。
)只有默写下来你才会发现自己常犯哪些错误。
(三)中译英 中译英也是提高写作的好方法。
根据范文的中文译文,将其按自己的理解译成英文。
译完后,你就会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大差距,这些差距就是取得写作高分的关键。
这时,对照范文,看看原作者是怎么写的,思考为什么这么写。
同样的一句中文,范文中使用了哪些词汇和句型
你使用了哪些词汇和句型
学习范文使用不同的词汇和句型。
通过不断练习,你的写作水平不知不觉就提高了。
(四)写作 模仿范文写作新的文章,套用范文的精彩词汇、句型、句子和框架。
最初套用时可能比较生硬,但随着不断的积累,组合起来会越来越顺手。
上述的高分策略是提高四、六级英语写作水平最有效的方法。
在练习写作的初始阶段, 可勤查语法书和字典等工具书, 背记常用词和短语, 以扩大词汇量, 拓展知识面。
背单词时要深刻理解所背词语的内在含义, 并了解其使用环境。
备考时,熟记一些过渡词、句型和范文,并进行仿写。
考试时,使用学习过的、熟悉而有把握的词汇和句型,没有把握的句子,尽量采取“回避政策”,切忌自编自造汉语式的英语词组和句型。
1.SPORTS AND HEALTH A HEALTHY BODY IS NECESSARY FOR A HEALTHY MIND. AS IS KNOWN, TO HAVE A SOUND MIND, WE MUST FIRST HAVE A SOUND BODY. THIS IS OF VITAL IMPORTANCE. ONLY BY KEEPING OURSELVES HEALTHY AND STRONG CAN WE FEEL ENERGETIC AND VIGOROUS IN STUDYING AND WORKING AND LIVE A HAPPY LIFE. TO KEEP OURSELVES FIT, PHYSICAL EXERCISE IS THE BEST WAY. ALL OVER THE WORLD MILLIONS OF PEOPLE TAKE PART IN DIFFERENT KINDS OF SPORTS. SPORTS ARE PERHAPS THE MOST POPULAR FORM OF RELAXATION THAT ALMOST ALL CAN ENJOY.IN TAKING PART IN OUT-DOOR SPORTS, WE ARE CLOSER TO NATURE AND CAN TAKE IN FRESH AIR. THE BEAUTY OF NATURE WILL KEEP US CLEAR-HEADED, WHICH IS ESSENTIAL TO OUR HEALTH. BESIDES, SPORTS AND GAMES BUILD OUR BODIES, PREVENT US FROM GETTING TOO FAT, AND KEEP US HEALTHY. THEY ALSO GIVE US VALUABLE PRACTICE IN HELPING THE EYES, BRAIN AND MUSCLES TO WORK TOGETHER. HOWEVER,SPORTS STIMULATE THE CIRCULATION OF BLOOD AND HELP TO EXCRETE THE WASTES IN THE BODY. SPORTS CAN ALSO WORK UP OUR APPETITE AND ACTIVATE OUR DIGESTION. AS A RESULT, WE CAN BECOME STRONG-BODIED. I ALWAYS TAKE AN ACTIVE PART IN PHYSICAL EXERCISE AND ENJOY GOOD HEALTH. I SELDOM GET SICK BUT FEEL VIGOROUS EVEN IF I WORK A WHOLE DAYLONG. I SHALL KEEP UP DOING PHYSICAL EXERCISE SO AS TO LIVE LONGER AND DO MORE FOR THE COUNTRY. 运动和健康 健康的身体对于健康的头脑是必要的。
众所周知,要有健全的头脑,就应有健全的身体。
这是至关重要的。
们只有保持身体健康,才能在学习和工作中精力充沛,生活愉快。
为了保持健康,体育锻炼是最好的方法。
世界上有许多的人参加不同种类的体育运动。
体育运动可能是几乎所有的人都可享受的最大众化的娱乐形式。
参加户外运动, 们能更接近大自然并能吸收新鲜空气。
自然界的美使 们头脑清醒,这对健康是极其必要的。
另外,体育运动能增强 们的体质,防止发胖,保持身体健康。
他们还在使眼睛、头脑和肌肉协同动作方面提供宝贵的锻炼机会。
同时,运动促进血液循环,有助于排泄体内废物。
运动还可以引起食欲,促进消化。
这样 们就能身强力壮。
总是积极参加体育锻炼,身体很好。
很少生病,即使工作一整天也感到精力旺盛。
要坚持体育锻炼,争取长寿,为国家多做些事情。
2.Sports and health A healthy body is necessary for a healthy mind. As is known, to have a sound mind, we must first have a sound body. This is of vital importance. Only by keeping ourselves healthy and strong can we feel energetic and vigorous in studying and working and live a happy life. To keep ourselves fit, physical exercise is the best way. All over the world millions of people take part in different kinds of sports. Sports are perhaps the most popular form of relaxation that almost all can enjoy.In taking part in out-door sports, we are closer to nature and can take in fresh air. The beauty of nature will keep us clear-headed, which is essential to our health. Besides, Sports and games build our bodies, prevent us from getting too fat, and keep us healthy. They also give us valuable practice in helping the eyes, brain and muscles to work together. However,sports stimulate the circulation of blood and help to excrete the wastes in the body. Sports can also work up our appetite and activate our digestion. As a result, we can become strong-bodied. I always take an active part in physical exercise and enjoy good health. I seldom get sick but feel vigorous even if I work a whole daylong. I shall keep up doing physical exercise so as to live longer and do more for the country. 运动和健康 健康的身体对于健康的头脑是必要的。
众所周知,要有健全的头脑,就应有健全的身体。
这是至关重要的。
我们只有保持身体健康,才能在学习和工作中精力充沛,生活愉快。
为了保持健康,体育锻炼是最好的方法。
世界上有许多的人参加不同种类的体育运动。
体育运动可能是几乎所有的人都可享受的最大众化的娱乐形式。
参加户外运动,我们能更接近大自然并能吸收新鲜空气。
自然界的美使我们头脑清醒,这对健康是极其必要的。
另外,体育运动能增强我们的体质,防止发胖,保持身体健康。
他们还在使眼睛、头脑和肌肉协同动作方面提供宝贵的锻炼机会。
同时,运动促进血液循环,有助于排泄体内废物。
运动还可以引起食欲,促进消化。
这样我们就能身强力壮。
我总是积极参加体育锻炼,身体很好。
我很少生病,即使工作一整天也感到精力旺盛。
我要坚持体育锻炼,争取长寿,为国家多做些事情。
高中语文作文平时上学早自习背万能题目,开头结尾,素材,好句,名言,范文能提高作文分数吗,背多少,高
段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。
一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____. 2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。
首先,……;其次,……。
更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______. 4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。
它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____. 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious. 8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 10. 根据图表\\\/数字\\\/统计数字\\\/表格中的百分比\\\/图表\\\/条形图\\\/成形图可以看出……。
很显然……,但是为什么呢
According to the figure\\\/number\\\/statistics\\\/percentages in the \\\/chart\\\/bar graph\\\/line\\\/graph,it can be seen that______ while. Obviously,______,but why?结尾句1. 至于我,在某种程度上我同意后面的观点,我认为…… As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ____. 2. 总而言之,整个社会应该密切关注……这个问题。
只有这样,我们才能在将来……。
In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______.Only in this way can ______in the future. 3. 但是,……和……都有它们各自的优势(好处)。
例如,……,而……。
然而,把这两者相比较,我更倾向于(喜欢)…… But ______and ______have their own advantages. For example, _____, while_____. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to______. 4. 就我个人而言,我相信……,因此,我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。
因为…… Personally, I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______. 5. 随着社会的发展,……。
因此,迫切需要……。
如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量,这个社会将要变得越来越好。
With the development of society, ______.So its urgent and necessary to ____.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. 6. 至于我(对我来说,就我而言),我认为……更合理。
只有这样,我们才能…… For my part, I think it reasonable to_____. Only in this way can you _____. 7. 对我来说,我认为有必要……。
原因如下:第一,……; 第二,……;最后……但同样重要的是…… In my opinion, I think it necessary to____. The reasons are as follows. First _____.Second ______. Last but not least,______. 8. 在总体上很难说……是好还是坏,因为它在很大程度上取决于……的形势。
然而,就我个人而言,我发现……。
It is difficult to say whether _____is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of______. However, from a personal point of view find______. 9. 综上所述,我们可以清楚地得出结论…… From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that____. 10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法,就可能控制不了这种趋势,就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果,所以,我们应该做的是…… If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do is_____.
四级关于名人名言作文模板
时我自己的想象让我爱上这项天天都有的作业。
在这和平年代,战争这玩意几乎很少发生,但男孩子从小就有着拿着铁刀上战场的愿望,而这个愿望现今很难实现,于是我就在想象中实现了这个愿望。
又发数学卷子了,全班同学都在唉声叹气,我也不例外,跟大家一起抱怨今天作业之多,但一个突发奇想,却让我改变了想法,为何不将做卷子当成一场战争呢?于是我进入了自己的想象世界。
我是朱元璋,那卷子就是陈友谅,卷子发下来就是战争开始的号角,而那卷子上的题目就是敌军的士兵。
我立刻拿起笔,开始与卷子作战。
首先,我眼前出现了一群小兵(填空题),我二话不说拿起武器就对他们狂砍,不一会儿小兵几乎全军覆没,只有一个士兵仍旧坚持着,他就是小兵统领(填空题最后一道)。
经过几分钟,我成功将他打败。
接着一群骑兵出现(计算题),他们虽然不强大,但十分难缠,总会用阴招,我小心翼翼地跟他们进行搏斗,丝毫不敢马虎,但还是负了伤(粗心错了一题)。
当骑兵被我打败,守城大将出现(应用题),终于到了放手一搏的时候了,我不顾一切杀向那些将领们,用了各种武器(使用各种解题方法),虽有时会不分上下(解题时没有头绪),但仍然顺利通过。
正当我松了口气时,最终的敌人出现了。
陈友谅(最后一道附加题)神不知鬼不觉地出现在我面前,向我发起猛攻,我一时招架不住(大脑有点儿疲倦),只好暂时撤退(闭目养神),经过一段养精蓄锐后,我重新开始战斗,但我们二
英语四级看图作文的开头怎么写
第一段:描述图画1、 As is vividly shown in the picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) above, 图画的内容。
The picture( 如果两个的话用pictures,也可以用drawing,同样的如果两个的话用drawings,如果是图表则用table,两个图表则用 tables) tells ( 注意,如果是前面的图画是复数,则用tell) us that 这个图片的大致反映的意思。
2、 Recent years people in 地名(比如中国、北京、美国等等)have witnessed the fact that 描述图片里的现象, And it is very common\\\/usual to see that in recent years.第二段:解释,说明和分析图片1、 The implied meaning of the picture(注意,同上进行单复数的处理) should be taken into account seriously. First\\\/To begin with, 揭示涵义\\\/原因\\\/结果1,Second\\\/What’s more, 揭示涵义\\\/原因\\\/结果2。
Last but not least\\\/Finally, 揭示涵义\\\/愿意\\\/结果3(如果有的话)。
And the social problem(如果是现象的话可以用phenomenon) has arisen the great concern\\\/care of our whole society\\\/world\\\/all the people.2、There may\\\/might be three(也可以是两个) factors which contribute to\\\/are responsible for\\\/explain\\\/can make clear the 图片解释的现象。
First of all, 原因1。
And then the second reason is that 原因2。
The last reason,I think, is that原因3。
第三段:给出自己的看法和想法以及解决问题的办法。
1、 In my view\\\/point of view (或者说as for me),We should take some measures as follows to deal with the problems followed in the picture. First, we should 具体的措施1.And then we have to \\\/must具体的措施2.Only in these ways,can we solve the problem of 具体的问题。
2、It is true that these unique\\\/social points can\\\/could together remind us that we should take some measures to solve it. 采取的措施1和2. Only in this way can we实现的目标!
在英语作文中,引用名言时该用什么句式
可以用以下句式:As the saying goes...As the proverb goes...或者直接引用就可以了。
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求英语四级考试作文经典万能开头语和结尾语
(批驳分析类)What Attitude Should We Take to Sth1. 社会上对某事物的错误观念2. 分析批驳其错误所在3. 给出如何看待该事物的建议写作模式(批驳分析类)1) With the arrival \\\/ birth of …, sth. is becoming more and more … in our life. 2) Hit \\\/ Affected with this trend, some \\\/ many people come to believe \\\/ contend that ...(错误观念) 3) But their viewpoint \\\/ belief could not arouse any echo in my mind.(作者的立场) 4) It is true that sth. is a key ingredient in one’s …(让步法分析) 5) On any scale of …, in fact, there is almost nothing heavier than sth.. 6) If we see sth. in its true colors, however, it isnothing but… (批驳分析I) 7) ... (进一步阐述) 8) And moreover, laying any undue stress on sth. may lead one to …, as can be easily seen in the cases of …(批驳分析II) 9) Therefore, it is necessary to take a correct attitude towards sth.10) On the one hand, … (正确看法I) 11) On the other, ... (正确看法II) 12) In sum, sth. means …but not … to our life. (结论句)
英语作文常用名言警句有哪些
大学英语四级考试作文(附范文)1.书信例1:感谢信(1) 给小何写信感谢他接待你在云南旅游(2) 回忆美好的旅行经历(3) 邀请小何来你的家乡做客June 17th , 2006Dear Xiao He,Thank you ever so much for having invited me for the tour of Yunnan, your home province. I had a fantastic time with you and your family. Your great hospitality will be unforgettable throughout my life. When I think of those gorgeous places of scenic beauty you showed me around, I couldn’t be more delighted. And the pineapple pie Grandma prepared for me is out of this world. I had never had so delicious food! Indeed, I am still missing your snug log-cabin, small and cozy, which was turned into my dream house in fairy land those nights.Would you come to Harbin, my home town, some time this summer vacation Harbin, a beautiful place frequently referred to as Oriental Paris, offers a picture of another kind. I can assure you another pleasant tour. My family and I cannot wait to see you here. Yours, Li Ming例2:投诉信(1)陈述你对学校图书馆的不满(2)列举图书馆存在的问题(3)希望能够得到改进September, 11Dear President,I am a sophomore with the Department of Law. My name is Wang Ming. I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library. You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds. It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time. In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye. Some seats in the reading rooms are ‘permanently reserved vacant seats’, that is, some students “occupy” some seats they never come to use. What a terrible waste of valuable resource! Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime. And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time. These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation. Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.Best wishes Yours sincerely,2.记叙文 例:A Welcome Back Celebration1.杨玲生病,情绪低落.2.班上同学准备cheer her up.3.举办一场欢迎party.Yang Ling is my fellow classmate and friend. Recently she had a terrible condition and has been hospitalized for over a month. She was depressed, sad and downhearted. She told us so many things are working against her, and she didn’t know how to change and redirect herself.The day before she was released from hospital, we, some of her friends decided to give a surprise to cheer her up the next day. That night, she came back, shoulders bent and head fallen. She was so deep in her bad mood that she didn’t realize that her dorm is the only one in the building that is dark. She turned the key in the lock and opened the door when the room was suddenly lit like a bright day. Her eyes sparkled with delight and surprise. She saw all her classmates crowded in this tiny room. Everyone was holding something in his hand, flowers, fruits, cards, cheering, “Welcome back!” She was so moved that she burst into tears. And smile returned to her pretty face. She said “Thank you all.” heartedly.Ever since that day, happiness and delight have stayed with her. Life is so wonderful. 3.论说文例:Buying or Borrowing Books(1) 有些人认为书应该借来看(2) 有些人认为书应该买来看(3) 你的选择
Buying or Borrowing BooksBooks can arm us with knowledge and information we need to make success of life. There are generally two ways in which we can have access to books: borrowing or buying. While millions are borrowing books, I still think buying them best suits me and gives me the greatest pleasure. Many people choose to borrow books. For one thing, borrowing books can save us huge amounts of money. For another, if we borrow books from the library or friends, we normally have deadline to finish them. And consequently we can read more books in a limited time, just as a famous Chinese saying goes, “books can not be read unless borrowed.”I believe that advantages for buying books are more obvious and compelling. Firstly, we can keep the books as long as we wish. Secondly, we can take whatever notes on the margin of the pages of the books. Finally, the process of selecting and keeping books can be a great fun.4.口语作文例:工作总结演讲1. 简述上周五系学生会搞的一次以环保为主题的到某一湖区拾trash的活动。
2. 上述活动的效果及存在的问题。
3. 你的建议。
My fellow students,Last Friday, the Students’ Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake. The purpose of this project is to enhance(加强)the environment awareness of general public. Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists. As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.Actually, we did a wonderful job. When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support. But our work still left some to be desired. For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted. For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing. But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning. In this case we can put in more hours. And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection. Thank you.5.图表作文A: staying at homeB: travelingC: doing social investigationD: other waysFrom the two charts, we can see that in the past ten years the students who go traveling and do social investigations during vacations have increased greatly while those who stay at home have decreased a lot.There are several reasons for the changes. Firstly, with the development of economy, many people have become better off. Students can get financial support from their parents for traveling. Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the past ten years. Many new scenic spots have been built and exploited. In addition, the students today are expected and encouraged to participate in facing the real world. In this way they can obtain the necessary experiences required when they go job-hunting upon graduation.From the changes in the charts, we can predict that more and more college students will make their vacations interesting and worthwhile by going to the outside world instead of staying at home. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Studying Abroad. You should write at least120 words following the outline given bellow:1. 近几年来越来越多的学生选择留学2. 出现这种现象的原因3. 这种现象可能带来的影响四级模考参考范文:Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into foreign countries to finish their education.They have not considered our homeland as the unique place to enrich their knowledge any more. Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges and institutions and dream to get degrees there.There are several reasons to cause this change. First of all, with the globalization and much more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and western countries. They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in the job-hunting market. Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese students in the past.The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them more possibility to get favorite jobs. And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be estimated by money.毕业的问题 1、Studying Abroad or Home (1) 现在有越来越多的人想出国留学。
(2) 出国留学与在国内学习的对比。
(3) 你的观点。
Nowadays, with the development of science and technology, moreandmorepeople want to study abroad. There are students from colleges and universities, from the middle schools, from the primary schools, and people from all walks of life. What difference does it makebetween studying abroad and studying home Though many students are crazy about going abroad to pursue their higher education, I think studying home is preferable. For one thing, you don’t have to take foreign language tests such as TOEFL and GRE . This can save you a tremendous amount of time, money and effort, allowing much of your energy to be devoted to your academic foals. In addition, if you study home ,you can stay with your family and old friends. Meanwhile , while studying home ,you can enjoy the kind of intimate friendship and comfortable family atmosphere which you can only dream of in a foreign university , where you will be accompanied by your own shadow most of the time. For these reasons, pursuing one’s higher education at home is a more realistic and sensible choice. In a word, I prefer to study home. The Intensified Postgraduate Entrance ExaminationIt can be seen from the graph that there are more and more students attending the postgraduate entrance examination year by year. Compared with before, the rate of the student taking part in the postgraduate entrance examination becomes higher and higher. In the meanwhile, the admittance rate is also rising. What are the reasons for this and the possible consequences On the one hand, there are three reasons for this. First, the job market becomes more and more competitive. As a result, most people want to find or exchange for a better job by obtaining a high degree. Second, most college students want to pursue their study after their graduation from the undergraduate. Third, with the development the science and technology, what has been learned at college is not enough to meet the need of the society. On the other hand, there are some possible consequences of this. For one thing, most people will be force to pay more attention to the examination than to the improvement of their true ability. For another, it will have a negative effect not only on the individual but also on the society in the long run.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a Letter of Apology. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 表达自己对晚交论文一事的歉意。
2. 说明未能按时交论文的原因。
3. 表示自己将尽快把论文补交上并表示以后将按时交作业。
这是一封道歉信,写的时候要遵循道歉信的一般模式:开篇直奔主题,然后说明原因,最后提出可能的补救措施。
第一段,对晚交论文及对此造成的后果表示歉意;第二段,说明理由(可信的理由,而不是随便应付老师的借口);第三段,表示尽快完成论文。
【范文】A Letter of ApologyDear Mr. Wang,①I am writing to apologize for my late homework. The paper which you have ②assigned to us last Monday was ③due this Friday, but to my regret, I haven’t even started it yet. I feel really sorry for not handing in the paper on time and ④for the inconvenience it would bring to you. I have caught a serious cold last week and the doctor asked me to stay in bed for a week since I was very weak and the weather was very cold these days. Therefore, I couldn’t go to the library to get the necessary ①referential information which was needed for my paper. As a result of this, I have not started writing the paper yet and could not hand it in on time.Fortunately I have finally fully recovered. I will finish the paper as soon as I can and ①try my best to hand in homework on time in the future. Sincerely yours, Li Ming◇第一段思路点评:表明歉意◇语言点提示:① I am writing to apologize (say sorry) for :道歉信的常用开头句式② assign: 分配,指定,布置③ due;到期的,预期的④ I’m sorry for the inconvenience it would bring to you: 另一句常用句式◇第二段思路点评:解释原因,虽然不是真的给人道歉,但是理由还是要充分的好。
◇语言点提示:① referential: 用作参考的◇第三段思路点评:表明尽快完成论文,并表示以后会按时交论文◇语言点提示:① try my best to….. in the future: 道歉信常用结尾Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是合理的;2. 有些人认为收入差距的存在是不合理的3. 收入差距对社会的影响议论文,根据题目要求文章可分为三点:收入差距的合理性;收入差距的不合理性;对社会的影响。
在叙述第一、二点时,可适当地的展开一两个小点。
注意各点之间的衔接,以及论证的逻辑。
● 范文●Income Gap 1There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap now. Some people hold that the gap is natural because it 2reflects different contributions that different people make in their work. 3In their view, those people with high income work hard and long. Besides, these people bring high 4efficiency, and create more wealth. Accordingly, they deserve high pay. 1On the other hand, there are always some people who view this gap negatively. They believe that a lot of crimes happen as a result of this income gap. Some people make so little from their work that they 2risk taking criminal acts to get rich. In fact, experts have long found out that most cases of crime are directly related to low income. There is 3another point to 4back up a negative view against income gap. For most people, income gap may destroy the satisfaction that they obtain from work. 1As anything has two sides, so has the problem of income gap. Personally, I believe that this gap may 2motivate people to compete better in job market. When this gap is growing too wide, however, our government should make some policies to 3get rid of its negative consequences.◇第一段思路点评:收入差距的合理性◇语言点提示:1 There has been a heated discussion over the growing income gap: 直接点题2 reflect 意为“反映”3 in one’s view 意为“在某人看来”(分析观点时常用词组)4 efficiency 意为“效率”◇第二段思路点评:收入差距的不合理性◇语言点提示1On the other hand:意为“另一点、另一方面”(提出相反观点,与上文衔接)2risk doing something 意为“冒险做某事”3another point: 提出另一小点4back up 意为“支持”◇第三段思路点评:收入差距的影响◇语言点提示1As anything has two sides, so…... 议论文常用句式2motivate:意为“激励,刺激”3get rid of:意为“摆脱,除去”



