
初中英语
一.写作准备阶段
(一)消除恐惧心理
自英语普及后,根据社会要求,杜绝“哑巴英语”,大多数的学校都从一年级就开设英语课程,到了四年级,学生的口头表达能力都很好,笔头方面就相对弱了。进行英语写作,他们就会觉得不自信,觉得自己水平达不到,能力也够不上。针对这点,就得需要教师在教学中,根据学生的实际能力安排教学。学生是教学的主体,要想教学有效果,就必须发挥学生的主动性。学生怕写作,一方面是觉得自己的所积累的词汇量和句子不够多,教师在教学中注重适量的拓展和培养积累单词,词组的好习惯,对句子进行举一反三的说。另一方面学生怕在写作中犯错,怕会因为一些小错误就受到老师的批评,就这方面,教师在指导时应多给予鼓励,只有让他们认识到了错误,改正了,才会减少错误,在鼓励中增强学生的自信心,从而消除他们对写作的恐惧感。
(二)创设写作环境
环境是非常重要的因素,人的成长需要好的环境,写作当然也要求有个好的环境。况且,写作是个复杂的思维过程,环境在此更显其重要性。在教学中,教师可以精心为学生创设一个积极、合作和富有鼓励性的环境,使他们乐于写作,充分发挥自己的思维能力。比如,在中年级的英语教学中可以安排学生对练习册上的短小语段摘抄下来,读读背背,培养语感;在高年级的英语教学中,可以安排写英语
(三)传授基本知识
写作就像盖房子一样,有了材料,要把这材料以一定的形式堆放在一起才能形成房屋,这都需要老师的指导。英语写作技能的难度较大,学生也不能很快接受,提高英语写作质量也不容易,教师在进行英语写作教学时,要特别注意教学目标与学生特点,采用适当的教学方法,传授基本的写作知识。
1.科学指导学生对单词的识记,提高单词拼写的正确率,减少不必要的拼写错误。教师可以引导学生在阅读过程中和其他课内外学习中养成记单词的好习惯,同时也要鼓励学生注重词组及常用句型的积累,同时也要给与适合的场合让他们输出。
2.语法是英语学习中非常烦琐,枯燥的一项,小学生很难接受,但在教学中适当得进行句法结构操练还是必要的。让学生自然地接受语言结构,以便他们在写作时能正确地表情达意。
3.汉英表达存在着差异,如Ilikeit,too.中文的正确表达是:我也喜欢它。不会说成:我喜欢他,也。这就是中文和英文在词序上的不同,也是一种习惯表达的不同。没有特定的规律,这就需要学生多阅读,培养好的语感。
4.标点符号虽是小问题但不可忽视,教师应对此进行讲解,把两种语言中的标点符号的用法不同进行比较,阐明正确使用标点符号对正确表达思想十分重要。如,在表示一个人说话,汉语中用冒号和双引号,在英语中是没有冒号的,要表示一个人说话,得用逗号和双引号。
二.写作训练阶段
写作包括能用所学词汇、语法和句型造简单的句子、回答问题、改写课文、看图写话、依照学过的题材写小短文。这些需要循序渐进,要从最简单的语言和言语练习开始,从基本要求做起,由易到难,逐步提高要求,每一步都要有具体要求,切实可行。
(一)句的训练
词连成句,造句是英语写作教学的主要练习形式之一。可以先由教师提供词素,让学生学会连句,熟悉句子结构,为以后造句打下基础。教师也可以在教授一种句型结构时让学生改句子。而后,让学生自己造句,教师常常可以为学生造句提供一个结合实际生活的情景,这样可以避免注重语言形式,忽视内容,脱离一定的情景与主题。
句型转换也是训练形式之一,让学生在不改变语言意义的前提下进行句型转换练习,理解表达同一个意思可以采用不同的句型,这样可以避免写作时句型的单调与重复。
(二)段的训练
句连成段,可以进行看图写作,教师出示一幅图,让学生对其进行描述写成小段。看图写作有其长处,可以在写作过程中可以增加图片与英语思维、表达的直接联系、培养想象力、减少对中文的依赖。为了使学生更多地参与写作教学,激发他们对写作的兴趣,看图写作的图画老师可以让学生自己根据
喜好,选择适合他们水平的图画或照片,带到课堂上使用。图画生动多样,大大激发了他们的写作兴趣,可以选一部分优秀的进行展示,评价,相互学习,这样能提高学生的整体水平。
(三)短文的训练
提供学生一些生活化的话题,选择的话题材料要接近学生的现实生活和学习。比如学生可以写自我介绍,写最喜欢的动物,学生会很活跃地思考,用最简单的句子表达他们的意思,表达他们的感情。
同时,也可以是对书本内容进行的扩充,如《牛津小学英语5B》,Unit4中出现了writeane-mail,在这里可以补充教授书信的格式,通过网络让学生学会用电子邮件发信,教师可以让学生结合自己的实际,与自己的朋友写e-mail,但要做到有信必回,这样才是有效的训练。如6B讲到 seasons时可以给他们一个topic:Whichseasondoyoulikebest?Why?这样的话题是他们自己切身感受,学生们可以畅所欲言。
(四)阅读的训练
俗话说:读书破万卷,下笔如有神。阅读是写作的基础,大量的,广泛的阅读,能加强学生理解和吸收书面信息的能力,有助于巩固和扩大词汇量,增强语感丰富学生的语言知识。教师可以指导学生读一些相同水平的文章、故事,记忆背诵一些典型的范文也是可以的。让学生在大量的阅读中积累词汇、句子,形成良好的语感,为学生更好的写作打下坚实的基础。
三.如何评价写作内容
学生的作文要及时地批改,对学生在写作中出现的错误,可以用一些柔和的方式指出,并给予他们指导,告诉他们怎么错了,订正在边上(订正在原位会使他们忽略他们的错误),知道正确答案,再加以鼓励。这样,他们会慢慢积累知识。即使有学生的错误很多,也不要说“写得不行,不好”之类的话,打击他们的积极性,可以给予他们一些建议,给予他们多些指导这样会更好。
对于写的好的,可以当场给予表扬和鼓励,把好的.文章读给大家听或者展贴出来,其余学生可以一起分享。俗话说“乐此不疲”,要学好一种东西,兴趣是至关重要的。它是获得知识进行创造性创作的一种自觉动机,是鼓舞和推动学生创作的内在动力,也是提高写作水平的重要途径。因此,在写作教学中要鼓励学生创作,培养他们创作的兴趣,好的作品可以将它们推荐到小学生学习报刊、杂志。这样,学生的积极性就调动了,他们也觉得有成就感,也更乐于写作了。
写作在英语教学中是不可忽略的一项,也是学生最难接受的。“宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来。”“滴水穿石非一日之功,冰冻三尺非一日之寒。”教师合理教学,学生长期持之以恒,做生活的有心人,做勤劳的小蜜蜂,多思考,多练笔,一定能对写作产生浓厚兴趣,提高英语写作能力。为今后的英语学习打下结实的基础。
初中英语作文范例一
My school
I am Alice. I am a student of No.1 Middle School. I study in Class Two Grade Seven.
There is a map of our school on the wall. The playground is in the middle of the school. On the left of the playground, there is a library. I like reading very much, so I often read books in the library. There is a teaching building behind the library. We study in that building. My classroom is on the second floor in that building. The teachers' offices are in that building, too. Where is the sport hall? Oh, it's on the right of the teaching building. I have P.E class in the sport hall. The canteen is in front of the sport hall. We have lunch and dinner in the canteen. In the school, I feel very happy!
This is my school. It's a big and nice place. I like my school very much. What about your school?
我的学校
我是爱丽丝。我是一中的一名学生。我在七年级二班。
墙上有一张我们学校的地图。操场在学校的中间。操场左边是图书馆。我非常喜欢阅读,所以我经常在图书馆里看书。图书馆后面有一座教学楼。我们在那栋楼里面学习。我的教室在二楼。教师办公室也是在那栋楼。体育馆在哪里呢?噢,在教学楼的右边。我在体育馆上体育课。食堂在体育馆的前面。我们在食堂吃午饭和晚饭。在学校,我觉得很开心!
这是我的学校。是一个又大又漂亮的地方。我非常喜欢我的学校。你的学校是怎么样的呢?
初中英语作文范例二
My goodfriend
I have a goodfriend,He is a boy,he has a very nice name—Robert.He comes from England.He has big eyes,they are round and cute.He comes to China with his parents.We know each other since last year.From then on,we become goodfriends.
At weekends,we often get together to play basketball,he plays it very well,and,he sings well,too.He teaches me English and I teach him Chinese.
We are goodfriends forever.
我的好朋友
我有一个好朋友,他是一个男孩,他有一个非常好听的名字—罗伯特。他来自英格兰,他有一对大眼睛,它们很圆很可爱。他和他的父母一起来中国。我们从去年开始认识。从那时候起,我们成为好朋友了。
在周末,我们经常一起打篮球,他打得非常好,而且,他歌唱得很好听。他教我英语然后我教他中文。
我们永远都是好朋友。
初中英语作文范例三
A Rainy Day
Today is a rainy day and it’s cold with the temperature of 5℃. There are only a few people on the street and they all wear thick down coats and boots. They walk quickly and seem to go somewhere to escape from cold.
It has been cold for a very long time and this winter is colder than ever, but I like it very much because I was born in winter. Besides, in my oppion, only the coldness makes a real winter.
雨天
今天是一个雨天,而且很冷,温度只有5℃。街上人很少而且他们都穿着厚厚的羽绒服和靴子。他们都走得很快似乎要走去某个地方来逃离寒冷。
这个冬天已经冷了好长一段时间了,而且往年的冬天都要冷。但是,我非常喜欢它,因为我是在冬天出生的。此外,我个人认为,只有寒冷才能造就真正的冬天。
初中英语作文常用句型
常用于引言段的句型
1. Some people think that …. To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.
2. For years, … has been seen as …, but things are quite different now.
3. I believe the title statement is valid because….
4. I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …. I believe….
5. My argument for this view goes as follows.
6. Along with the development of…, more and more….
7. There is a long-running debate as to whether….
8. It is commonly/generally/widely/ believed /held/accepted/recognized that….
9. As far as I am concerned, I completely agree with the former/ the latter.
10. Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides.
常用于正文段的句型
一、表示比较和对比的常用句型和表达法
1. A is completely / totally / entirely different from B.
2. A and B are different in some/every way / respect / aspect.
3. A and B differ in….
4. A differs from B in….
5. The difference between A and B is/lies in/exists in….
6. Compared with/In contrast to/Unlike A, B….
7. A…, on the other hand,/in contrast,/while/whereas B….
8. While it is generally believed that A …, I believe B….
9. Despite their similarities, A and B are also different.
10. Both A and B …. However, A…; on the other hand, B….
11. The most striking difference is that A…, while B….
二、演绎法常用的句型
1. There are several reasons for…, but in general, they come down to three major ones.
2. There are many factors that may account for…, but the following are the most typical ones.
3. Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.
4. Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
5. The reasons are as follows.
三、因果推理法常用句型
1. Because/Since we read the book, we have learned a lot.
2. If we read the book, we would learn a lot.
3. We read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence / consequently / for this reason / because of this, we’ve learned a lot.
4. As a result of /Because of/Due to/Owing to reading the book, we’ve learned a lot.
5. The cause of/reason for/overweight is eating too much.
6. Overweight is caused by/due to/because of eating too much.
7. The effect/consequence/result of eating too much is overweight.
8. Eating too much causes/results in/leads to overweight.
四、举例法常用句型
1. Here is one more example.
2. Take … for example.
3. The same is true of….
4. This offers a typical instance of….
5. We may quote a common example of….
6. Just think of….
常用于结尾段的句型
一、对全文进行归纳总结的句型
1. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….
2. Taking into account all the factors, we may safely come to the conclusion that….
3. Judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arrive at/reach the conclusion that….
4. All the evidence supports a sound conclusion that…
5. From what is mentioned above, we may come to the conclusion that…
6. To sum up/draw a conclusion, we find that….
7. In short/brief/a word/conclusion/sum/, it is….
8. Therefore/Thus/Then, it can be inferred/concluded/deduced that….
9. From/Through/According to what has been discussed above, we can come to/reach/arrive at/draw the conclusion that….
10. It is believed that….
二、表达个人观点的句型
1. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
2. As far as I am concerned, I am really/completely in favor of the test/policy.
3. In conclusion/a word, I believe that….
4. There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of… outweigh its advantages.
5. In my opinion/view, we should….
6. As for me, I….
7. As I see it, ….
8. From my point of view, ….
9. Personally, I think….
10. My view is that….
11. I think/consider….
12. I take/hold a negative/positive view of….
三、表达建议的句型
1. It’s high time that we tried every possible means to put an end to….
2. It’s really high time we took measures to solve the problem of/put an end to.…
3. There is still a long way to go towards solving the problem. We hope that efforts should be made to….
4. We must search for a quick action, because the present situation of… will surely lead to the end of….
5. There is no easy solution to the problem of…, but… might be useful.
6. There is no quick answer to the question of…, but … might be helpful.
7. It is necessary that effective/proper/quick actions/steps/measures be taken to….
8. It’s suggested that great efforts be made to….
9. It’s apparent/clear/obvious that the task of… requires immediate/considerable/great attention/efforts/consideration.
10. To check/control the tendency/trend is no easy task, and it requires a good/deep awareness/consciousness/understanding of….
议论文常用句型
1. It is a fact that….
2. It is well-known that….
3. There is no doubt that….
4. I think that….
5. Contrary to the popular thought, I prefer….
6. Some people say/believe/claim that….
7. It is generally believed that….
8. It is widely accepted that….
9. It is argued/held that….
10. While it is commonly believed that…, I believe….
11. It can be concluded that….
12. People’s views vary from person to person.
图表作文常用句型
1. The table/diagram/bar chart/pie graph/tree diagram/curve graph /column chart shows/illustrates/reveals/describes/depicts/reflects that/how….
2. The graph provides some interesting data regarding….
3. The data/statistics/figures can be interpreted as follows:
4. The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….
5. As is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table, ….
6. It is clear/apparent from the table/chart/diagram/figures that….
7. The vertical/horizontal axis stands for….
8. There was rapid/noticeable/great/sharp/steep/remarkable/slow/little/slight/gradual rise/increase/decrease/fall/decline/drop/change in development in ….
9. The percentage remained steady/stable at….
10. The figures stayed the same….
11. The figures bottomed out/peaked at….
12. The figures reached the bottom/a peak/a plateau during….
书信作文常用句型
1. I am writing to you in the hope that you could do me a favor to improve the horrible situation.
2. I would like some detailed information on/about….
3. I would be grateful if you could let me have details of ….
4. I am writing to request some necessary information about….
5. I am greatly concerned about….
6. My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. I wish I could repay it one day.
7. Thank you very much for the kindness you showed me during….
8. It is my pleasure/a great honor for me to extend an invitation to/invite you to….
9. I will be expecting you, so do not disappoint me.
10. I wish to apply for the position of… with your company.
11. I graduated with a BA degree in…from…in….
12. I am very excited and delighted over the good news that you are recruiting a….
表达效果较好的特殊句型
1. 平衡句:用相同的结构表达相似的意思
1) Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do for your country.
2) We shall fight him by land, we shall fight him by sea, and we shall fight him in the air.
3) I am learning how to study, how to organize my time, and how to concentrate.
4) We must believe that we have the knowledge, and that we are competent enough to fulfil the task.
2. 省略句: 省略不影响句子意义的词
1) Although exhausted by the demanding job, they refused to give up.
2) The road is very slippery as if covered with ice.
3) The sooner, the better.
4) Friends can be more dangerous than we sometimes suspect; developing real lifelong friendships much more difficult than we are willing to acknowledge.
5) Reformers are optimistic, conservatives pessimistic; conservatives live for the past, reformers the present and the future.
3. 倒装句:将句子中的某一成分放在反常位置,以达到强调效果
1) In vain did they try to persuade the USA to give up violence.
2) Only by so doing can we expect to stop further pollution and create a better world for us and the future generations to live in.
3) Here comes the opportunity you have been longing for to realize your dream.
4) To such an extent have they polluted the area that plants can not grow.
一、勤读、多背词汇,好精句
要想写好一篇文章,没有充足的词汇量是不行的。课文中的俗语和谚语的识记是通过背诵来完成。背诵是语言学习的重要手段,也是语言学习的必经之路。
1、背词句,背诵课文中的重点句型和短语尤其是课文中的俗语、谚语和经典句子。
2、背范文,将近几年高考中的作文和课文中好的段落以及报刊上的各种各样的体裁和优秀文章让学生多背,这样学生才能在自己的脑子中形成一定的写作框架,做到心中有数。
3、多读书,用英语进行思维。为了培养学生用英语思维的定势,增加对英语国家文化、社会风俗、风土人情、思维方式的了解,扩大视野,选择课外阅读,提高学生分析、判断、猜测、推理和领悟的能力。部分学生在写作时习惯用汉语思维,然后再逐句译成英语,结果写出来的文章是汉语式的英语。要想学会用英语进行思维,就要有计划、有目的地培养学生的语感。一个重要的方法就是大量阅读,选择精彩的词句、文章和佳句,引导学生阅读,摘抄或背诵来培养语感。
二、亲自动手,自己写作
教师应注重基本功训练,严格要求学生正确,工整,熟练地书写字母,单词和句子,同时注意大小写和标点符号。进行组词造句,组句成段练习时,要学生写出最简单的短句,为以后英语作文打好扎实的基础。这种练习可以安排在刚开始的训练中,要求学生能够用最基本的时态去完成写作。另外结合高中英语基础知识的复习,对学生提出较高写作能力的要求。
1、范例引路
学生在进行短文写作训练时,教师应提供各种文体的范文,讲明各种文体的写作要求和注意事项,如日记,便条,书信,通知的格式等,并给予必要的提示,并掌握各种体裁文章的格式。在平时的教学中,教师应该指导学生应对高考中各种体裁文章。
2、限时训练
教师当场发题,限时交卷。这样能促使学生瞬间接受信息,快速理解信息,迅速表达信息,提高实际应用和应试能力。这一步是关键,也是学生的的难关。必须要求学生在写作过程中牢牢记住以下口诀:“先读提示,要点与格式要弄清;时态语态要当心,前后呼应要一致;结构搭配,莫违背;文章写好细检查,点滴小错别忽视”。学生明确目的,并掌握要领后,要严格在规定时间内完成作业。
3、多想精炼
在平时的教学中,教师要求学生多看、多听、多想,用心体验和感悟身边的人和事,然后将自己的体验和感受用英语写出来。教师可要求学生每周写两篇,有话则长,无话可短。对不同水平的学生作不同的要求。鼓励表达自己的看法和体会。
此外,有时根据所学单元知识布置一篇作文,或给学生提供一些与时事或与学生学习活动和生活有关的材料。此类话题的现实性能诱发学生的写作兴趣,使其有话可写,有感而发;还能增强其信心,使其写作能力、技巧得到充分的锻炼和提高。对于有待进步的学生要及时励,激发其写作热情,增强其自信心。
4、自改互改
对照范文,学生先对已查出的表达有误的.地方进行初改。范文不可能把各种表达方式都包括进去,况且学生作业中的错误也不尽相同,因此,还可安排学生互改。以同桌两人为宜,这样同时进行了改错训练。
三、培养学生良好的写作习惯
写作教学是一项“由简单到复杂,循环往复不断上升的”过程。不是一蹴而就的,需要教师在教学中由浅入深、由简入繁、由易到难、循序渐进。起始阶段,培养学生良好的写作习惯是非常重要的。要求学生做到以下几点:
1、认真审题。要求学生认真审读图表或提纲,领会意图,捕捉信息,确定文章时态及体裁。
2、写提纲。教师引导学生构思文章要点,写出每个段落主题句、关键词,然后确定细节和内容要点。
3、写初稿。经过审题和列提纲后,学生开始写作,教师指导学有意识地使用固定句型,使用关联词,把段落按逻辑顺序连成一体,形成基本连贯的初稿。
4、检查错误。检查是书面表达不可缺少的环节,学生完成初稿后,老师指导学生从以下六个方面进行修改和查错:
(1)看要点是否齐全,有无遗漏;
(2)体裁是否恰当,有无偏题;
(3)内容是否连贯,有无缺词;
(4)语法是否正确,人称、时态、语态、冠词及名词单复数等有无错误;
(5)用词是否得当,有无习语及固定搭配等方面的错误
(6)最后注意句与句、段与段之间有无合适的连接及过渡,经过有效的训练,学生犯的错误会逐渐减少,同时学生的书面表达能力会逐步提高。
总之,教学有法,教无定法。教师面对的教育对象是多样化的,因此在教学中一定要关注学生的个体差异,采取相应的措施,激发学生写作的兴趣。让学生参与实践,体验成功的快乐,循序引导,学生点滴积累,不断磨练,这样能达到理想的效果。
堂弟这几年可真够能折腾的。他大学毕业后,口口声声要自己创业,说自己就喜欢做生意,因为做生意有挑战性。他的老爸老妈见他豪情万丈的样子,全力支持。
谁知,5年过去了,堂弟依旧一事无成。回顾一下他这几年的经历,算得上是屡战屡败,屡败屡战。他先是做水果生意,有家里做后盾,资金不成问题。但他做了一段时间,感觉水果不容易保鲜,而且竞争激烈,做起来很不顺手,总之有多个理由让他放弃。不久后,堂弟转战服装生意,但又遇到了各种各样的问题,最后又放弃了。从前年开始,堂弟又尝试做装饰材料生意。开始的时候,做得还算不错。可时间久了,堂弟懒散随意的本性就暴露出来。直到不久前,他又一次宣布生意以失败告终。
全家人聚在一起,说起堂弟这几年的经历,长辈们都怪他做事不用心,赔了钱是小事,关键是到现在还没找到立业之本。堂弟却一脸满不在乎,对大家说说:“年轻就有失败的资本,失败是成功之母嘛!我嘛,就好比在纸上写错了字。怎么办?大不了撕毁重来呗!”他甚至还大声唱起了:“人生豪迈,大不了从头再来……”让人头疼。他的观念根本就是错的,总以为失败是无所谓的事。
我不由想起曾经练毛笔字的经历。上师范的时候,书法课是我们的必修课,毛笔字一定要练好。为了节省开支,我找了一大摞旧报纸。在旧报纸上练毛笔字,是当时很多人的方法。可是,尽管我很用功,一大摞旧报纸都快用光了,字写得还是没有长进。而我的一个同学,从始至终都是用质量很好的宣纸练字,他的字进步特别快。我问他原因,他说:“我用的是昂贵的宣纸,所以每次练字都非常用心,总想着不要白白浪费一张纸,每次都要写好。我不给自己留失败的机会,所以就能越写越好了。”我恍然大悟,我用旧报纸练字,思想上不够重视,总觉得写不好也没事的`,所以才会没长进的。
我的堂弟创业过程中,不就是把生活当成旧报纸了吗?总是那么漫不经心,以为失败了无所谓,“大不了重头再来”。如果他能够珍视每一次创业机会,让自己没有退路,或许早就有成绩了。
其实,很多人做事都有这种心理。工作中,我们以为一次小小的失误无所谓,总是有机会弥补的。因为把生活当成了旧报纸,我们放任自己一再犯错,以为错了可以像对待旧报纸似的一撕了之。因为犯错付出的代价不够大,所以错了再错,直至生活这张旧报纸千疮百孔,不堪一击。



