
【习作要求】
请以Good Health为题写一篇文章。
【参考范文】
The desire for good health is universal. Especially nowadays, the possession of good health is regarded by nearly everyone as essential to a happy life as well as a successful one. Only in good shape can you expect to live comfortablyorwork effectively.
How to keep healthy, then? First, enough time should be set aside for persevering in exercises in addition to sleep and rest. Second you must give up the habits that damage your health, such as smoking and drinking too much alcohol. Finally, be sure to have your physical check-up regularly.
As for me, I have always been taking care to have proper sleep and relaxation. In my spare time I like running, swimming, and playing table tennis. So, I can keep fit and have a good life.
【名师点评】
本文层次清楚,逻辑分明,第一段讲好身体的重要性,第二段讲保持身体健康的'种种方法,第三段讲就“我”而言,“我”如何加强体育锻炼。本文语言地道,亮点颇多,如:First… second… Finally…三个词分述三种方法;The desire for, …is universal, Especially nowadays, the possession of, is regarded by nearly everyone as…, Only… can we expect to….How to…then? As for me, I have always been taking care to… so, I can…等,这些短语的运用使得文章错落有致,多姿多彩。
Usually, our teachers often give some evaluation on us according to the performance in their eyes. Although it is one of the Chinese traditional education system, it is unfair in some extend. So, teacher evaluation becomes an important part in the education system, especially in the course evaluation. To have high quality courses, both teachers and students should take the responsibility. So, if students can appraise the teaching quality for every teacher, it will be helpful for high quality classes. As no one will be perfect, teachers can realize their disadvantages on teaching from teacher evaluation. Thus, it is important and necessary.
通常,我们老师经常会根据在他们眼中我们的表现来做出一些评价。虽然这是中国教育体系中的.一个传统,但是在一定程度上是不公平的。所以,教师评价已成为教 育体系的重要组成部分,特别是在课程评价上。展开高质量的课程,教师和学生都有责任。所以,如果学生能够对每个教师的教学质量做出评价,这将有助于提高课 程的质量。没有人是完美的,教师可以教师评价中了解到自己的缺点。所以说教师评价是重要和必要的。



