各位领导、各位同仁：
大家好。
很高兴被邀请参加今天的朗诵比赛，并有幸代表评委对今天的比赛发表一点不成熟的看法。
今天朗诵这场比赛，用时下最流行的说法，就是高、大、上。高端、大气、上档次。参赛选手们精彩的表演，给我们留下了深刻的印象。
下面我简单地从三个方面来说说：
一、在篇目的'选择上，今天参赛选手选择的内容，都是积极、健康、向上的，也有，都是催人奋进，令人感动、充满了正能量的，无论是朗诵者还是聆听者，都能从中汲取心灵的鸡汤。
二、在朗诵的技巧上，参赛选手都能用标准的普通话来朗诵，字正腔圆。能够准确地把握作品内容，透彻地理解其内在含义，并结合诗文的内容，恰当地运用了停顿、重音、语速、语调等手段，对作品进行二度创作，用自己独特处理对作品进行全新的诠释。在背景音乐的选择上，也是恰到好处，极具艺术感染力。
如最后，我提一点建议，朗诵的要求比朗读要高，朗诵是用清晰、响亮的声音把文章背出来，以传达文章的思想内容。可见，它要求不看作品，面对观众，除运用声音外，还要借助眼神、手势等体态语帮助表达作品感情，引起听众共鸣。它集文学性、艺术性、表演性于一身，从今天的比赛来看，我们在表演性和艺术上还有进一步提升的空间。
演讲比赛点评稿
首先，能为本次演讲比赛做点评我很荣幸。同时，我也很感谢大赛组委会给我这样一个机会，能和大家一起学习和交流。
演讲不同于一般讲话，演讲是一门艺术。内容方面要求演讲者能够围绕主题，深入剖析，唤起听众的思考和共鸣，用自己的才情和智慧以理服人。形式方面要求演讲者能够恰当表达，激情投入，以情动人。并且要对自己的形象有所设计，着装要大方得体，手势、神情要协调自然，甚至目光都要要诚挚、恳切，与听众有交流。
综合今天参赛选手的演讲，总体上有以下几个特点：
第一、主题突出。参加演讲的同学，都从不同侧面演绎了“清明 感恩”这一主题。缅怀先烈，寄托哀思，树立理想，有对未来的展望，有对心灵的扣问，爱国，爱家，爱生活；自信自强，有责任有担当，能够给人启迪，给人教育。
第二、声情并茂。今天的演讲，大多数选手都基本上做到了声音洪亮、感情充沛、抑扬顿挫、张驰有度，从而使演讲具有感染力和吸引力。
第三、语言流畅。参赛选手都能做到脱稿，而且演讲中较好地运用了对偶、排比等修辞手法，使今天的.演讲显得文采飞扬、激情四射。
我个人认为，3号、7号、9号选手在以上几个方面表现更为优秀。 当然，今天的演讲，也有一些不足。
个别选手准备不够充分，演讲的内容方面缺乏新意、缺乏个性，没有给人留下深刻的印象。有的选手过于紧张，缺乏停顿，使整体内容层次不清，而且个别词语发音不准确，比如“负载”与“载入史册”音调不准确。还有同学对演讲内容部熟悉，有长时间的停顿，使演讲不够流畅，影响了演讲的质量。
在今天的演讲过程中，同学们身上洋溢的青春和热情，很是能够打动人、感染人。
美国作家塞缪尔.厄尔曼，有一首诗歌《青春》：我在这里摘选几句，送给大家。
“青春不是桃面、丹唇、柔膝，而是深沉的意志，恢宏的想象；青春气贯长虹，勇锐盖过怯弱，进取压倒苟安”。我希望同学们在以后的学习和生活中都能够积极参加学校组织的各项活动，锻炼自己的能力，展现自己的风采，为自己的青春画卷留下浓墨重彩的一笔。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, dear students of Ningbo Foreign Language School and you, 14 excellent contestants，it’s my great pleasure to be here for the very first time as a judge for this English speech competition. I think all the contestants did a great job today, so let’s give a big round of applause to all of them. Another round of applause goes to the teacher for having chosen such an interesting topic like "Open to the World Cultures" and to everyone who has contributed to organize the competition and has helped to making it a success. I have been really enjoying this contest thoroughly, especially because all the 14 contestants have approached the topic from different perspectives. All speeches have been well
researched, with good thoughts as well as interesting ideas. I am very pleased to see that most of you delivered your speech with good pronunciation, clear articulation, with good eye contact and a proper manner. On top of all this you all have also demonstrated your remarkable analytical abilities.
As an English teacher, I’m always very happy when I see young people who are doing such a terrific job. The importance of today's goes beyond the competition itself. Your school and this competition continue to promote international communication, and will help you to progress and to have more and more opportunities in your future life.
I am so impressed with this successful speech competition and with this beautiful school that as the mother of a grade 6 primary student I wish that my daughter will have the opportunity to study here , so she can learn to speak English more fluently, just like you all.
I always like to say that ”Life is a journey”. Language learning is a life long experience and we never finish learning, especially for the English language which is so alive and ever changing. So as you move forward with your language learning make sure you enjoy every moment of your journey.
Finally I would like to take this opportunity to wish all the contestants the best of luck and great success in your future. ---评委老师
It's terrific to see you dress formally and well prepared for the speech, and your poster is well done
as well.
however, you need to make more eye contact with the audience and better speak with various tones and clear pronunciation. I have to say you are a bit stiff without proper body language, which is no good for impressing the audience and the jury. Moreover, I really hope you can put more passion into the speech and try to eich it with more facial expression, then surely your speech would be fabulous.
演讲中没有语法错误，尤其其中一个男孩讲的'非常好，他演讲的开头很好，而且很幽默，演讲有激情，并且和观众有很好的眼神交流并且在演讲中有适当的肢体语言
your grammar is ok. It's worth mentioning that a boy gave a fantastic speech with an impressive beginning, furthermore, he was fairly humorous and enthusiastic throughout the speech, and he made good eye contact with the audience and used appropriate body language in the speech.
