篇一：我的英文写作的
一、英语写作的特点.
The characteristics of formal writing
1.名词化趋势
I do not eat much.-->I am a light eater.
The clock on the desk reminds me of time.-->I put a clock on the desk as a reminder of time.
We once cried, laughed and disappointed.-->There were moments of tears, moments of laughter, and moments of disappointment.
注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词, 目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.
2.无灵主语(区别于被动语态)
我们中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.
More and more young students studied further in the past two decades.
-->The past two decades witnessed a growing number of young students for further study.
Looking out of the window, you will have a nice view.
-->A glance out of the window offers you a nice view.
注意: 名词化趋势和无灵主语常常是相结合的.
3.被动语态
这一点大家比较熟悉,不详细讲.比如:
Great efforts should be made to…..
What can not be denied is that….
二、句式的写作:
Main features of English sentences:
1.长短句结合
Love is patient and kind. It is never jealous, boastful, proud or rude. It keeps no record of wrong that others do. It always protects, always fruits, always hopes, and always perseveres. Love never fails.
一般来讲,总结性的句子应当使用短句,而说理的句子应用长句.
2.并列复合句
这种句子属于十分难写的句子,也举一个例子:
He who wants to save his life will lose it, and he who loses his life for me will save it.
3.单一复合句
也就是我们常说的各种从句,不再举例.
三、Variety of sentences:
1. ”-ing & -ed” groups
(1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed,” May time go on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”
(2)Reviewing what one has learned and gaining new insights, one is fit to be a teacher.
(3)Compared with the tradition, modernity is more dynamic.
2. ”to do” groups
To spend too much time in study is sloth; to use them too much for ornaments is affectation; to make any judgment wholly by their rules is the humor of the scholar.
3. adverb
Simply, amazingly, absurdly, broadly, practically and so on
Intelligently applied to daily life, modern technology will surely bring benefits to the well-being of the human race.
4.介词短语
In pursuit of, in spite of (注意平时自己的收集)
In pursuit of excellence, ever pushing up the limit, life consists in the hope born of despair.
5.主语从句
What China needs is not more morals, but more prisons for politicians.
句子的变化还有 It is self-evident(adj) that…….和There be 这样的句子
6.倒装
(1)将一些否定性含义的副词和短语在句首,用倒装会使句子生色不少.
Never before has such a high standard been achieved.
Hardly had he arrived when she started complaining.
(2)为使描绘更加生动,与介词同形的副词可以移动到句首,而把主语放到谓语后面去.
Following the roar, out rushed a tiger from the bushes.
In came a pretty girl he had never seen before.
四、插入语
插入语可以是一个小词,也可以是一个同谓语的形式.
1.先看一个小技巧：(对there be 句型均有效)
There is, recently, a debate amongst educators that……
通俗的讲,在老外眼里,主语与谓语离的越远,句子的档次越高.
2.插入语后面再接上一个定语从句;
Direct experience, a necessary means to recognize the world, which differs from knowledge acquired from books, is a major step to the cognitive world.
再看几个同谓语从句的例子:
1.Television, one of the most pervasive and persuasive technologies, marked by the rapid growth and drastic change, has a profound impact on people’s lives.
2.Courage, a basic quality that every human being is supposed to possess when facing a dilemma, is highly cherished among young people.
3. Convention, generally accepted practice especially with regard to social behavior, has now been increasingly challenged.
平时要多积累这样的句型,使之变成自己的语言.
Tip:对同谓语的解释尽量宽泛一些,有利于句子的拉长.
对于入语加定语从句开头.
就是说:将题目中的中心词拿出来,进行宽泛的解释.
这一方法对很大一部分的考题都是有效的.
以上就是我的一点总结,希望对大家会有所帮助.
篇二：初二 英语
Our Future
Nobody know what will happen in the future. And predicting the future is difficult.
In the future I think people will have robots in their homes. There are already robots working in factories. And new robots will have many different shaps. People won’t usu money. Everything will be free. Many people will keep many different pets, like snakes or spiders .Kids won’t go to school they will study at home on computer. Books will only be on computers.,not on paper.There will be more computers and more free time. And people will live to be 200 years. In the world,there will be more people and more cars. Maybe there will be less pollution and more tress.The world will be more beautiful.
Our Future
In ten years., people will have robots in their homes. And people won’t use money, everything will be free. Books will only be on computers, not on paper. Kids won’t go to school. They will studying at home on computers. I think there will only be one country. People will live to be 200 years old There will be more people. There will be more free time. And there will be more tress. And there will be more cars. There will be less pollution There will be more tress. And cities will be very big and clean
Our Future
In the future, maybe we’ll be an actor、a doctor、a singer or anther else. So we’ll be able to make a living doing something we love. We’ll live in busy and beautiful city such as Shanghai Beijing and Hangzhou. And I’ll live in Shanghai. Because I went to Shanghai last year and fell in love with it.
Probably we’ll live in an apartment or a building with our parents.If we like pets, we’ll have many different pets, such as rabbits, parrots and dogs. Pets need a lot of love. So we’ll spend a lot of some time with them.
Maybe we’ll travel all over the world. Especially at English-speaking countries such as the United States and Australia, so we’ll be able to improve our English. Predicting the future can be different. But I believe our dream will come true.
Trust self! Where there is a will there is a way!
Our Future
What our life will be like in the future
I think the life of mine will be more modern than now. Every family will have robots. The robots will help us do all the housework. The food will be more healthy. We will have a personal computer. We will be able to do some shopping. The little children won’t go to school . They’ll study at home on computers. People might fly to the moon for holidays.
How wonderful our future will be! I hope my dreams will come true.
Our Future
In the future, we’ll grow up. We will have the different jobs. We’ll be a friendly teacher, an excellent、reporter、a good policeman、a popular singer and so on. Perhaps we’ll work in the companies. But we won’t too tired. Because there will be robots everywhere. Robots will work in the factories. So we will be free sometimes we will have a wonderful time every day. We can go swimming with friends every day. We can also go shopping with friends. We won’t us parper money. We can go to France to take a vacation. We can go to place where we want to go we
will have own computer. We can work on computers.
Work hard, we have to study hard now.
Let’s together!
In The Future
In the future, the world will be more beautiful there will be fewer cars, and there will be less pollution. Cities will be very big and clean. There will be more trees.
People will have robots in their homes. Robots can help people do lots of housework, for example, do the dishes,wash the clothes,cook dinner… And people won’t use money, because everything will be free. Student won’t go to school , the studying at home on computers. People will have a lot of free time.
I think the life will be beautiful in the future. How about you
Our Future
Predicting the future can be difficult. But I think our future will be better than now.
If we plant more tress, the environment will be better There will be less pollution.
Our lives will be better, We will be able to eat healthy food. We will live in big apartments. There will be more robots. They will help people to do lots of simple work. The people will have more free time.
I hope our future can be better.
Our Future
In the future, I think the world will changed a lot.
I think kids won’t go to school, they will study at home on computers.Book will only be on computers, not on paper. People will be more free time. Because robots will help our do something people will have robots in their homes.
I think there will be many tall buildings and wide streets in my hometown. There will be more tress and flowers everywhere. Perhaps many robots will work in factory. There will be less pollution. I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful.
Our Future
Our future will be wonderful. People will have robots in their homes. Kids won’t go to school. They’ll study at home on computers. People won’t use money, everything will be free. There will be more free time. There will be less pollution. There will be more tress. In ten years, we will live in sea. I think there will be more tall buildings. There will be fewer cars and more buses. Maybe one day people will fly to the moon for vacations. My life will be a lot better than this now. Our Future
I think our future will be more beautiful. Do you thinkLet’s talk about our future.
Everyone has their dreams. In the future. I think they will come true. However “no cross, no crown.” We must hard-working now. In the future, I think wo will be a teacher, a doctor, an athlete, a lawyer and so on.
We will have robots in our homes in the future. They help with the housework and do the most unpleasant jobs. And we will work with robots. In the future. Everyone will be friendly. And wo won’t use money. Everything will be free.
“Health is happiness.” So in the future.Everyone will be in good health.
We never know what will happen in the future do weBut I believe the future will be beautiful. Our Future
In the future. I think our world will be more beautiful than now. We will have robots help us to do something.They can do simple jobs over and over again.These robots will look more like human.
In the future I think everything will be free.We will study at home on computers. There will be less pollution and the environment will be better than now.
Predicting the future can be difficult, but I believe our dream will come true in the future. Our Future
We are students now. But we both have ourselves dreams. For example.I want to be a reporter. Because if I became a reporter. I can make a lot of money and. I also can meet lots of interesting people.So I should study Chinese well.My friend-Ann wants to be a singer. Because she thinks it;s a really interesting job.And she wants to be a flight attendant. She should study English well.
We have different dreams. So we believe our future will be happy. And our dreams can be come true.
Our Future
In the future people will have robots in their homes.These robots are just like humans.They help with the house work and do the most unpleasant jobs.
For example there are already robots working in factories.These robots look more like huge arms.The do simple jobs over and over again.People would not like to do such job and would get board.But robots will never get board.
篇三：我的家乡英语作文
英语作文 我的家乡
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
英语作文 我的家乡
I am from ShenZhen. In spring ,the weather is warm and wet. I can play kite. In summer, the weather is hot and wet. I can swim in the swimming pool. In the autumn, the weather is cool and dry. I can play kite, too. In the winter, the weather is cold and dry. It never snow.
英语作文 我的家乡
写一个《我的家乡》英语作文60词
Welcome to my hometown! Shanghai is my hometown. It is a modern and busy
town. It has a long history. There are many big supermarkets, beautiful gardens and good factories here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see big trees and nice flowers. There are many restaurants in Shanghai. The food tastes very delicious.You can enjoy eyery minutes of it. Many visitors come here to enjoy it.
篇四：我的写的英语作文
The international HuanBaoRiToday is The international Huanbaori, We will going to use plants and waste items decorate our classroom. Teacher siad:“Who’s home has plant？” And we are all from home to bring the plant . First we get a tree,and than,we get some shoes and bells,and we put them on the tree. And we put some flowers and some trees in the classroom . And teacher sida:“It wery beautiful, I like it wery much!”
At the beach Today is holiday, my parent and my frend went to the beach. At the beach,we want to make the statue.
Firth,we use the sand to make a mouse statue,and we put the shell on it.But
suddenly the high tide,the mouse’s mouth is rotten I think it can be a frog,so we make a frog. Our parent all side:“It is very beautiful,we all like it!”We all have a good time!
In the Veterinary
hospital Today , I and my pet went to the veterinary hospital . In the veterinary hospital,my cat see a dog! It is very afraid of dog. The dog went to bite it, and my cat want to go back home!
20 minutes later,my cat and I went in the room,and 10 minutes later,we go back home and sleep!
My father
My foot sprain , yesterday . Today is rain,I can walk, in morning dad came back home . He give my the letters , and ger my the breakfast. One month later, My feet are good ,and I can walk again,but dad is very tired. This is my father.
篇五：英语作文介绍我们的学校
Welcome to our school! Our school is the key middle school in this city. Now we are in the front gate. Entry in this school, you can see there is a big football playground on the left and a big resturant on the right. If you’re hungry, you can have something good in there. The grand teaching building is right behind the football playground. We spend most time in the classrooms. Behind the teaching building, there is a little lake with many fish in it. Oh, there is also a nice library next to the lake. After the class, we can entry the library freely to read the books we like. This is our school. Don’t you think it’s great
欢迎来到我们学校! 我们中学是这所城市的重点中学。现在我们来到了学校的正大门。进入到这所学校,你可以看到在校园的左边有个很大的足球场,右边有个很大的'餐厅。如果你饿了,你可以去餐厅吃些好吃的东西。巨大的教学楼就在足球场后面。我们的大多数时间都待在教室里。在教学楼后面,有个小小的湖泊,很多鱼在水里游。噢,对了,小湖泊的旁边还有个图书馆。下课的时候,我们可以进去读自己喜欢的书籍。这就是我们的学校。你不认为这很棒吗
篇六：我总结的英语作文
英语作文总结
高中英语作文的类型
1要求对两个对立的观点给出自己的看法
（1） 引出主题
1There heated discussion/ debate about whether --------观点
（2）some people Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③------理由二). Moreover, ④------(理由三).
3While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------理由三).
(3) In my opinion / as for me ,
From what I have said ,I agree to the thought ------我的观点
小结：虽然这只是一类作文，但是其实里面的句子在写作文中可以互用的
阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
１． 阐述
２． 分析并举例使其更充实．
The good old proverb ------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,------(理由一). For example, ------(举例说明).
Secondly,------(理由二). Another case is that ------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------(理由三)．
In my opinion, ------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please
remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it./ only if do as the proverb say ,can we -----
最后一句话，可以适用于很多作文的最后一句。
英语写作常用句型（一）段首句
1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some
people suggest that ____.
2. 俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天， 它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our
forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even
3. 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……； 其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily
life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is
that______.
4. 现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且） ……。
Nowadays，it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides，______.
5. 任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不 利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it
has both advantages and disadvantages.
6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看 来，……
People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.
Some people say that ______.To them,_____.
7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming
more and more serious.
8. ……已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈 的辩论。
______ has become a hot topic among people，especially
among the young and heated debates are right on their way.
9. ……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许 多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
______ has been playing an increasingly important role in
our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of
benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可 以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？
According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in
the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______
while. Obviously，______，but why
（二）中间段落句
1. 相反，有一些人赞成……，他们相信……，而且，他们认为……。
On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At
the same time，they say____.
2. 但是，我认为这不是解决……的好方法，比如……。最糟糕的 是……。
But I dont think it is a very good way to solve ____.For
example，____.Worst of all，___.
3. ……对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。 首先，……。而且……，最重要的是……
______is necessary and important to our countrys
development and construction. First，______.Whats
more, _____.Most important of all,______.
4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以……。
There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we
can______
5. 面临……，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来……。一方 面……，另一方面，
Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective
measures to______. For one thing，______For another，______
6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说……，另外……。所有这些方法肯定 会……。
It is high time that something was done about it. For
example. _____.In addition. _____.All these measures
will certainly______.
7. 为什么……？第一个原因是……；第二个原因是……；第三个原因 是……。总的来说，……的主要原因是由于……
Why______The first reason is that ______.The second
reason is ______.The third is ______.For all this, the
main cause of ______due to ______.
8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，象……。
However, just like everything has both its good and bad
sides, ______also has its own disadvantages, such as
______.
9. 尽管如此，我相信……更有利。
Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous
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篇七：写好英语作文之我见
摘要：英语写作在高考命题中对学生是相对较难的部分，有的学生对此弱项抱舍弃态度。要解决这一难题，应让学生在平日的学习中打好扎实的基本功，掌握一定的写作技巧，并要坚持大量的写作练习。有效地利用这几种方式，定能促进学生写作能力的形成。关键词：学法、英语、高中 英语写作在高考命题中对学生是相对较难的部分，他考察考生综合运用语言的能力。试题要求考生根据所给情景和要求写一篇书面材料。但他并非要求考生按照“提示”逐句翻译，而是要求考生在充分领会提示的“前提”下，用自己的语言，组织成一片内容充实、句子连贯、用词贴切的作文。那么高中生如何培养自己的写作能力？在高考中如何能得心应手地写出篇好作文呢？我觉得首先要解决好以下这三个问题。 一、打好扎实的基本功 第一、首先要调动学生主动学习的积极性。有的学生对此弱项报舍弃态度，情愿把精力放在其他方面，也不愿花过多的时间和精力来提高自己的写作能力。所以要先教书育人，把外语学习与理想和目标教育联系起来教育学生，使他们充分认识到学好外语是时代的要求，是培养跨世纪人才的需要。只有学好外语，才能更好地运用这一交际工具为祖国现代化服务，从而树立为国、为民而学的远大理想和奋斗目标，使学生产生持久的动力， 保持长久的、旺盛的精力。这样才能提高学生的学习兴趣和积极性，推动语言运用能力的持续提高。 第二、要加强词汇、语法、句型教学及操练。要打好语言能力基础，词汇量是写作的基本建筑材料之一。得心应手地遣词造句，对于表达文章的思想内容和风格特点具有重要的作用。词汇量不足或掌握得不好，都会给写作带来困难。因而，在进行词汇教学时，教师不仅要教足词汇量，还要讲清楚每个词的每个意义的使用条件、用法及搭配关系，进行典型同义词、近义词比较，点出构词法等。在通过例句说明的同时，让学生模仿造句，使学生真正掌握其用法及语义特点。学生只有在较好地掌握了充足词汇量的基础上，写作时才能做到随心所欲地选择适合文章主体和风格的词、意义确切的词、表.达清晰和生动的词、形象具体的词，以及符合英语惯用法的词，以达到较好的表达效果。另外，语法规则与句型，是英语写作必备的另一种重要建筑材料。学生在初、高中已经学过基本语法知识与句型，由于缺乏操练，并没有很好地掌握。因此，在教学实践中，还必须加强基础语法与句型的训练，同时注重汉译英与造句练习。句子是作文的基本单位，一个句子表达一个完整的思想。成功的作文是由清晰的、合乎语法规则的句子组成的。所以，加强词汇教学，注重语法与句型操练，打好句子基础，是提高写作水平的重要环节。[!--empirenews.page--] 第三、努力创造课内外的语言环境，学生的各项语言技能是相互依存、相互促进的。教师在课堂上组织教学的过程就是与学生交际的过程。教师在教学实践过程中，应以学生为中心，尽量多给学生提供机会和情景。让他们进行模仿、回答、复述等，以促进他们写作能力的形成。 组织课外活动小组，是弥补课内操练时间不足的有效办法，开展活动时，可联系自己的生活实际，叙述自己的思想及课文学习后的
认真审题立意，确定写作中心。找出根据这个中心能够扩展的材料有哪些。要避免写那些与中心内容无关紧要的细节。以命题作文“The Teacher I Admire Most”为例，文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位老师，因而就不能泛泛谈论老师这一职业或自己的几位老师。` 其次，围绕中心，列出写作提纲。提纲一定要包含所提供的情景、要点，同时要尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。仍以“The Teacher I Admire Most”为例。提纲可以这样写：1）Who is the teacher I admire most2)My reasons. 3)What can I learn from the teacher. 第三，根据字数多少，扩展成篇。扩展的内容一定要紧扣主题，千万不要写那些与主题不相关的内容。扩展时要注意短文地字数，以避免由于字数不够引起的扣分 在写的过程中也有些窍门，以下几点可供参考。 1、在整篇文章中，避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。 2、使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子地连贯性和表现力。 3、改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序。可以把状语至于句首，或用分词等。 4、学会使用过渡词。 如：1)递进 furthermore, moreover, besides, in addition, then,etc 2)转折 however, but, nevertheless, afterwards,etc 3)总结 finally, at last, in brief, to conclude, etc 4)强调 really, indeed, certainly, surely, above all, etc 5)对比in the same way, just as,on the other hand,etc[!--empirenews.page--] 5、避免重复使用同一单词或词组。
6、确定文章用第几人称写，基本时态是什么。 三、坚持大量的写作实践 写作能力必须通过长期的、大量的反复实践才能获得。如果实践不够，即使学生完全掌握了课堂上所学的语言知识，也懂得了一定的写作技巧，一旦使用语言时，也难免开口结结巴巴，下笔力不从心。 总之，写作能力的培养和提高，有赖于扎实的基础、写作方法和大量的写作实践。只要我们从这点出发，充分调动学生的学习积极性，以学生为中心，创造良好的课内外语言环境，定能有效地促进学生写作能力的形成，改变目前学生写作能力弱的现状，在写作方面，推动外语教学再上新台阶。
篇八：我的老师(英语作文)
My Teacher
My English teather is Mr Xu, his English name is Martin. His English is very good. And he always wears a pair of glasses. He likes wearing blue trousers. My teacher is handsome. He often plays with us after class. He often reads books and English. His hobby is reading books. Mr Xu likes drinking Coke and eating chips. Sometimes he is angry, because we are naughty. Sometimes he is happy, because we are good.
Our art teacher is not too old and not too young. He’s tall and strong. He has a big mouth and small ears. He likes wearing a hat. He is good at drawing. He’s very funny. We all like him.
My new teacher is science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes。
My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart, isn’t heToday, we have
science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is heHe’s a Mr. Zhou .
My English teacher
I have a very good English teacher. Our class all like her very much. Though she’s our English teacher, but we often call her name Holly. She is very friendly to us. We all like to have English classes very much.
She is so young and beautiful. She looks like a middle school student. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes wearing T-shirts and jeans.
She teaches English very well. In class, she looks like our elder sister. We usually learn new things by playing games and singing songs ,so we always have fun in English class. She often helps us to solve problems. After class, she looks like our friend. We often play games together.
Now , you see , do you like our English teacher too
My favourite teacher is Miss Huang. She is a beautiful lady. She has two big eyes, a high nose and a little red mouth. There is always a smile on her face.
Miss Huang likes singing and collecting posters. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always sits in front of the piano and plays nice music. She is good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us dancing.
Miss Huang likes dogs very much because the dog is very friendly and cute. Her favourite color is blue. Because blue is the color of the sky and the sea.
This is my favourite teacher. Our classmates all like her very much.
译文：
我最喜欢的老师是黄老师。她是一位漂亮的女性。她有两只大大的眼睛，一个高高的鼻子和一张小小的红唇。她的脸上总带着笑容。
黄老师喜欢唱歌和收集海报。她钢琴弹得很好。晚上，她常常坐在钢琴前弹奏优美的乐曲。黄老师跳舞也很棒。有时她也会教我们跳舞。
黄老师非常喜欢狗，因为狗很友好也很可爱。黄老师最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色是天空和海的颜色。
这就是我喜欢的老师。我们班的同学都非常喜欢她。
Hello! I’m Jessie. I like English very much, because of my English teacher, Nettie. Today, I’ll introduce her to you.
In my eyes, she’s not a teacher, but a lovely girl and a good friend of mine. She is not tall. She is thin. She has the long hair. Her face is round. There are two small eyes on her face. She likes smiling. When she smiles, her eyes just like the moon at the beginning of the month. I think she is very beautiful girl.
She’s very kind, like an old friend. She can sing. She can draw. She can dance. She can speak very good English. She can tell us stories. She can play games with us. When we have an English lesson, we feel very happy. All of us are interested in her lesson.
I have a good teacher. I think I’m very lucky.
如梦令李清照教案 篇1
一、教学目标：
1、朗读诗歌，体会诗歌的内在节奏美。有感情地朗读课文，背诵课文。
2、学会本课一个生字。理解由生字组成的词语。
3、了解词的有关知识，理解、领悟词的内容和意境，能把自己想象的景象写出来。
二、教学重点
有感情地吟诵词，以“沉醉”为切入点，感悟词人的快乐心情及对大自然、美好生活的热爱。体会词的特点。
三、教学难点：
1、以“沉醉”为切入点，想像词境，并能用语言描绘出来。
2、有感情地吟诵词。体会李清照的词作特色。
四、教学方法
诗歌教学重点应在读上下功夫，因此，教学本诗重在教会学生读，采用反复诵读法，让学生在读中悟，读中品，读中感。再用比较的方法，提供另外一首李清照的词作，了解词的特点，感悟作者的写作风格。 诗歌重在读，学习本诗，要让学生加强诵读，适当加以指导，充分体会诗作的意境和感情。
五、教学过程
一、复习导入
1、 大家还记得《夏日绝句》吗？（齐背）
2、说说你了解的李清照的相关情况。
3、 出示幻灯，简介李清照
补充：古代社会，女子无才便是德。她却被称为“一代词宗”，词史地位好比诗中李白。我们今天要学的《如梦令》（板书齐读），就是她和你们差不多大的时候写的。
3、今天我们学习李清照的一首词《如梦令》
4、同时呈现诗与词：轻轻地读，你发现词与诗在表现形式上哪儿不一样？
5、简介词的特点
词起与唐，盛于宋。词的句子有长有短，因此又叫长短句。每一句的字数、节拍，包括演唱的旋律都是靠词牌来规定。这里的词牌就是（如梦令）。很多词没有题目，我们往往用第一句来当它的题目。所以这首词的题目也可以叫（常记溪亭日暮）数数它有几行？
（6）再数数每一行有几个字（教师手势引导，学生读一行报一行数字665646）？所有的如梦令，都是这样的结构。
引读，男生读《夏日绝句》；女生读《如梦令》，（节奏要特别有变化：平长仄短）。
二、 初读全词，理解诗意
初读，要求：读准字音，读准节奏。
如梦令 李清照
常记溪亭日暮 ， 沉醉不知归路。
兴尽晚回舟， 误入藕花深处。
争渡，争渡， 惊起一滩鸥鹭。
自由读，指名读读，齐读
3、默读思考，圈画出不懂的词语，想一想词的大意。
同桌交流
4、 交流词语的意思。
常记：经常想起。
溪亭：小溪边的凉亭。
日暮：太阳快要下山，时间不早了。
沉醉：形容醉的程度很深。
归路：回来的路。
兴尽：兴致得到满足。
5、 明确词语解释，先想一想这首词的大概意思，然后再自己说一说。 全词的大意：
经常回忆起在溪边凉亭游玩饮宴的情景，醉得连回去的路径都辨别不出来了。一直到兴致完了，天已经黑了，才掉转船头回去。结果却搞错了方向，船行到了藕花深处。
奋力地划啊，奋力地划啊，把栖息在沙洲上的水鸟惊得全都飞起来了。
6、朗读体会全词的意思。
三、 美读全词，领悟意境
1、请大家细细读几遍完成以下的问题。
（1）这件事发生在什么季节？（教学“藕”字）
（2）这首词记叙了一件什么事？
（3）为什么会误入？
（4）为什么词人会常想起这件事呢？
2、其实整首诗就围绕着两个字来写，哪两个字？（板书：沉醉）
3、词人因何而醉？（板书：美酒）
词中强调喝酒的地点是（溪亭），所以要读重音。
词中强调喝酒的`时间是（日暮），所以要读重音。
词中强调喝酒后的状态是（沉醉），所以要读重音。
师强调：读重音不是单纯的加重读音，而是用它把前后的词语意思都凝聚起来 （个人读，齐读）
4、作者喝着美酒不知不觉就醉了，醉到哪种程度呢？
5、让作者沉醉的仅仅是酒吗？作者从视觉、听觉、嗅觉中告诉了你答案。 默读在词中找一找，想一想，批注一下
（视觉上，余霞、荷叶、荷花、鸥鹭。关注色彩：绿、红、白、金黄 ）
（听觉上，你的耳边萦绕着（鸥鹭扑棱声、鸣叫声；水声，惊叫声、划桨声） （嗅觉上，深深地闻一闻，沁入心脾的荷花淡淡的清香）
6、哪你说让作者沉醉的除了美酒还有什么？（板书：美景）
作者喝着美酒，欣赏着美景，心底弥漫着一种什么情绪？（欢乐的，轻松的，愉悦的，美好的，沉醉的
美酒加美景，给了她美好的心情，这种心情，让我们读着 ，看着，也跟着陶醉了。（板书：美好的心情）
7、再读，感悟词人不仅“沉醉”于酒，“沉醉”于“景”，还“沉醉”于“情”。
四、对比赏读读，延伸拓展
对照比读两首《如梦令》比较它们的相似之处，对词有更进一步的了解
如梦令李清照教案 篇2
一、作者简介：
李清照，宋代女词人，号易安居士、齐州章丘人（今山东），父亲李格非，是当时著名学者，夫赵明诚为金石考据家、早期生活优裕，与赵明诚共同致力于书画金石的搜集整理、宋钦宗靖康二年（1127），李清照与丈夫为逃避战乱来到江南，不久丈夫病逝，词人展转于杭州，越州（今绍兴），金华一带，在孤苦生活中度过了晚年，但她一直关心国家大事，也从未停止过文学创作、
李清照擅长写词，前期以抒发对爱情的追求和对自然的热爱为主，写得曲折，含蓄，韵味深长，形象鲜明、后期的词和前期迥然不同，国破家亡使她精神痛苦，所以词风也充满凄凉低沉之音、主要是抒发伤感怀旧，悼亡之情。
李清照是南北宋之交的词作大家、其词的内容虽然没有摆脱爱情与离愁别恨的传统范围，但在南渡后，她的词更多的表现出对国家，人民和个人的深沉伤感，她的词对女性内心世界的严肃而深刻的描绘，于委婉细腻中一洗以往词作的妩媚不实的气氛，给词坛带来清高的意趣，淡远的情怀，空》，已散佚，后人有《漱玉词》辑本，今人有《李清照集校注》
二、词文赏析：
1、“昨夜雨疏风骤”中的“疏”字应解为“疏狂”，侧重于“狂”字。
2、结合杜甫《三绝句》诗句“不如醉里风吹尽，可忍醒时雨打稀”，说说女主人公昨夜饮酒过量（睡醒了还有残酒），到底是为什么？
昨夜酒醉是因为惜花。这位女词人不忍看到明朝海棠花谢，所以昨夜在海棠花下才饮了过量的酒，直到今朝尚有余醉。
3、尽管饮酒浓睡，但清晓酒醒后所关心的第一件事是什么？
院中的海棠经过一夜的狂风骤雨，现在怎么样了。
4、女主人公为什么不自己去看看，却问卷帘人？“试问”的“试”字反映了怎样的心理？
女主人公昨夜就已知道，经过风雨之后，今朝的海棠定是落红满径了。之所以试问，不是真有疑问，而是自己不忍亲见落花的悲惨，一个“试”字，将这种复杂的心理委婉地传达出来。贴切入微，曲折有致。
5、本来以为经过一夜风雨，海棠花一定凋谢得不成样子了，可是侍女卷起窗帘，看了看外面之后，却漫不经心地答道：海棠花还是那样。“却道”有丰富的内涵，请同学们说说看。
一个“却”字，既表明侍女对女主人委曲的心事毫无觉察，对窗外发生的变化无动于衷，也表明词人听到答话后感到疑惑不解。
6、“知否、知否？应是绿肥红瘦”，“绿肥红瘦”，形容绿叶繁茂、红花萎谢的情景。“应是”也包含着女主公复杂的心理，你能替她就出来吗？
你哪里懂得，娇嫩的海棠花怎么能经得起狂风骤雨呀。表明词人对窗外景象的推测与判断，暗含着“必然是”和“不得不是”之意。含有不尽的无可奈何的惜花情在，可谓语浅意深。
7、“绿肥红瘦”历来为人称道，说说好在哪些方面？
“绿” 代替叶，“红”代替花，是两种颜色的对比；“肥”形容雨后的叶子因水份充足而茂盛肥大，“瘦”形容雨后的花朵因不堪雨打而凋谢稀少，是两种状态的对比。本来平平常常的四个字，经词人的搭配组合，竟显得如此色彩鲜明、形象生动。由这四个字生发联想，那“红瘦”不正表明春天的渐渐消逝，而“绿肥”象征着绿叶成荫的盛夏的即将来临吗？这种极富概括性的语言，又实在令人叹为观止。胡仔《苕溪渔隐丛话》称：“此语甚新。”《草堂诗余别录》评：“结句尤为委曲精工，含蓄无穷意焉。”
8、词人为什么这么惜花？
惜花实际上是惜春，惜自己如花的青春年华。
三、板书设计：
雨疏风骤→借酒消愁→怕见落花→绿肥红瘦。
如梦令李清照教案 篇3
教学设计：xx初级中学
教学目标：
理解诗人曲折抒发的惜春之情
感受李清照言浅意深、含蓄曲折的语言风格
教学重点：理解诗人曲折抒发的惜春之情
教学难点：感受李清照言浅意深、含蓄曲折的语言风格
教学流程：
一、导入
1、人称“千古第一才女”，创“易安体”的李清照
记忆课下文学常识
2、介绍李清照的生平
南渡前多写悠闲生活，韵调优美
南渡后多怀乡忆旧，情调忧伤
二、理解意涵
1、朗读这首词，说说这首词中出现了哪些人物、场景、对白？
人物：主仆两人
场景：春雨后的屋中
对白：“海棠依旧”“知否，知否？应是绿肥红瘦。”
2、结合杜甫《三绝句》：“不如醉里风吹尽，可忍醒时雨打稀”，联系下文，说说李清照昨夜纵酒的缘由可能是什么？
不忍见花被吹落
3、李清照醒后第一件事是什么？
了解经历风雨后，庭院之中的海棠情况如何
4、既然如此关切，念念不忘，李清照为什么不自己去看海棠究竟如何了？“试”体现出她怎样的心理？
很关切，又不敢于、忍心面对
5、从“却道”的“却”字，你能品读出诗人怎样的心绪？
她心中早已知晓海棠花的境况
对侍女粗心的不悦
6、“知否，知否？”怎样朗读才符合诗人当时真实的情感？
对侍女的粗心的嗔怪
自己的心境无人理解的无奈
7、“绿肥红瘦”写出了什么？诗人的用字有什么高妙之处？
写出海棠花经历一夜风雨后可能的景象。仅仅四字就形象可感。
用拟人的手法，更凸显诗人的爱花惜春之情
8、作为一名女子，诗人的惜春其实还有怎样的一层含义？
惜青春时光的短暂易逝
三、朗读与总结
1、理解女诗人惜春之后更为细腻的心绪后，带着这一份理解，再回过头来看前文，你对李清照之前的回避、躲闪、不忍有了怎样的认识？
2、在跟深切的理解诗人内心曲折深藏的情感后，再一次朗读诗歌，在朗读过程中重读并重点感受以下字词：“试”“却道”“知否，知否？”“应是”。读出诗人内心复杂幽微的情感波澜。
3、归；纳语言风格——言浅意深，含蓄曲折
朱自清(1898年11月22日—1948年8月12日)，原名自华，号秋实，后改名自清，字佩弦。原籍浙江绍兴，出生于江苏省东海县(今连云港市东海县平明镇)。现代杰出的散文家、诗人、学者、民主战士。1916年中学毕业并成功考入北京大学预科。1919年开始发表诗歌。1928年第一本散文集《背影》出版。 1932年7月，任清华大学中国文学系主任。1934年，出版《欧游杂记》和《伦敦杂记》。1935年，出版散文集《你我》。
论朱自清散文的特点
103文二班 申XX
内容摘要：现代作家抒发内心情感最常用的便是散文，朱自清又何尝不是?在他生活的那个特别的年代里，自己的情感往往围着时代的大背景，又系着自己小小的内心。或直白、或间接、或豪放、或委婉。他的情感似乎是时代赋予的。然而，他又尽力去摆脱那恶
关键词：细腻、感人至深、借景抒情
一、 朱自清散文的创作背景
在对作家的研究中，他们的作品的艺术、思想往往是其本身内心深处的情感与所处的时代相互作用的结果。
朱自清作为现代作群中最具影响的散文作家之一，其中国传统知识分子“位卑而未敢忘忧国”的思想贯穿他的一生。他践行“为人生而艺术”的现实主义创作方法，使得其散文作品中也渗透着时代的声音。
(一)、时代背景
军阀割据，帝国主义势力明争暗斗，旧中国在风雨飘零中苦苦斗争，一代小资产阶级知识分子朝不保夕，广大劳动人民处在水深火热之中。
(二)、自身背景
1、 作为当时社会上小资产阶级的一分子，由于受到阶级的局限性，虽发现了社会的不平与黑暗，但并未能找出产生这种黑暗的根源及解决方法。
2、 家庭的离乱、变迁，父子之间存在矛盾冲突。
二、 朱自清的典范之作——《背影》、《荷塘月色》
朱自清散文的题材大致分为四类，其中有直接写感人至深的亲情作品，又有借助景物抒发心情的名篇。
(一)、感人至深之《背影》
1、《背影》的大致思想内容
描述了家庭遭变故的情况下，父亲送别远行的儿子的全过程。用朴素真切的语言，对父亲在车站给儿子送行的情景进行了细致的描写。表现了父亲的一片爱子之心和儿子对父亲的思念之情。符合我们民族伦理道德的一种传统的纯真而高尚的感情。父子之间互相体贴，特别是父亲在融汇了辛酸与悲凉情绪的父子之爱中，含有厄运面前的挣扎和对人情淡薄的旧世道的抗争。引起了人们的同情、叹惋乃至强烈的共鸣!
2、《背影》的写作特色
内容上：(1)抓住人物形象的特征“背影”命题立意、组织材料，在叙事中抒发父子情深。
(2)文中四次出现“背影”，虽情况不同，但思想感情一脉相承。
语言上：(1)语言非常忠实朴素，又非常典雅文质。这种高度民族化的语言，和《背影》所表现的民族精神气质，文章的完美结构恰成和谐的统一。
(2)文章通体干净，没有多余的字眼，除夹入一些文言词语以外，没有华美的辞藻，生僻的词语，都是质朴的家常话，生活气息浓厚，提炼的非常简洁。
(3)文章全用白描记叙事实，不作任何修饰渲染。文中使用白描，将父亲为“我”买桔子的场景写得活灵活现，仿佛父亲的背影就在我的眼前。
(4)语言平时简洁却能传达出无限深情，字里行间渗透着一种深切怀念之情，感人至深。
(二)、美景传情之《荷塘月色》
1、《荷塘月色》 的背景
1927年7月，“四·一二”反革命政变后，朱自清面对这一黑暗现实，悲愤不满而又陷入对现实无法理解的苦闷与彷徨之中。他怀着这种孤独苦闷的心情写下这篇《荷塘月色》。
2、《荷塘月色》的思想
杨朴先生说过“此文是作者把潜意识的美人原型和爱欲投射在了荷花的意象上”，并说“这就是使此文章成为朱自清潜意识愿望的象征”。他认为《荷塘月色》表现的纯粹是个人情感，与时代的政治无关。其实，这并不是绝对地脱离政治，朱自清在大革命失败后，因憎恶现实无力济世的痛苦，不愿同黑暗社会同流合污而清高自处的思想情感。
他在文章中通过写荷塘的美，莲花的“出淤泥而不染”的高洁品质，来突出自己不与世俗想混的内心世界，勾勒出三幅意象画。
(1)通过月色与人的沟通而淡化了梦境与现实的距离。把“妻”与“儿”的睡熟的幻梦与“我”通过对暗夜里月色的氛围营造而形 成梦境与现实的统一。
(2)通过对曲径小道的描述而达到梦境与现实的整合，实现他们之间的情感的联系。作者以小径作为了融合现实与梦境的象征性通道，并言之“是梦境通过现实的必由之路。”
(3)这种梦境与现实与现实的错位式描写，实质是为了宣泄一种被压抑了的愿望，是一种潜在的意识。作者企图把这种潜在的意识愿望脱离政治性因素的包围。
作者用这三幅意象画把恬淡月色中梦境的游离作为一种现实压抑的突暴式愿望，并认为“夜游荷塘”只是一种情感心绪的抒情化表达，从而由这种内心的隐意识引延出“美人象征”这一说法。
3、《荷塘》之荷花
初读文章，里面恰到好处的比喻、拟人给我留下抹不掉的印记。与语言的优美、辞藻的华丽似乎在此体现得淋漓尽致。
作者这样列举，写荷叶，“田田的叶子，叶子出水很高，象亭亭的舞女的裙。”荷花是，“层层的叶子中间，零星地点缀些白花。有袅娜开着的，有羞涩打着朵儿的，正如一粒粒的明珠，又如碧天里的星星，又如刚出浴的美人。”荷花的清香是，“微风过处，送来缕缕清香，仿佛远处高楼上渺茫的歌声似的。”荷花的
朱自清以一种朦胧的`象征来宣泄对美的独善情怀，先把荷叶的意象置入中国的传统文化中作结，即以传统的荷叶形象来阐释朱自清外露的原型意义。从一个侧面反映了当时知识分子奔波劳碌、前途渺茫、谋事艰难、境遇凄惨的现实。在作者心头笼罩了一层不散的愁云，如文中所表现的灰暗基调。
三、朱自清散文的艺术特色
(一)、真挚、深厚的情感投入。古语云：感人心者，莫先乎情。在朱自清那些以家庭生活为素材的作品中，或感伤、或温厚、或幽默的人伦之情，深深地感染着读者、拨动着读者的心弦。如《背影》中父亲对儿子无微不至的关怀和照顾，步履艰难的老父亲的背影成为中国文学中一个经典镜头，感人至深。
(二)、情景交融的意境刻画。朱自清原本是一个诗人，曾认真研究过现代诗，且有很高的造诣，因此在散文创作中自然也不失其诗人的本色。“文中有画、画中有诗”是后人对他的评价。例如在《荷塘月色》中，淡淡的月色、田田的荷叶、薄薄的清雾、
(三)、缜密精巧的构思。虽然朱自清的散文篇幅大多不长，但其构思却颇具匠心。《背影》的出奇制胜;《春》的多侧面描写，而把文眼(一年之计在于春)置于描写和叙述之中，毫无刀刻斧凿之痕;《荷塘月色》虽说为了写心中的不宁静，但一路下来，却处处见“静”。
(四)、独特的语言艺术。朱自清散文的语言之美，是有口皆碑的。如《背影》语言的质朴、《荷塘月色》语言的清丽、《温州的踪迹。绿》语言的纤
总之，在五四新文化运动及文学革命中，朱自清以其散文有力地证明了：取代文言文的白话文，也可以写出与文言散文
参考文献：《朱自清散文集》
《关于现代散文写作——答编者问八题》，《文艺知识》第一集之三
《<荷塘月色>的精神分
