求一初中人物描写英语作文
字数要多
My father is a gentle man My father has small eyes,Wear a pair of glasses,looking more gently,the daddy's hair are not many, he said the intelligent head does not grow hair，daddy does the management, but daddy usually ever not talk bureaucratically to others, therefore his personal connection is specially good,is the same as me.daddy speaks always extremely temperately,never say hit the person,curse at people are also few,calculated scolded people not to be big, although sometimes also can be angry for a longtime,but just only about one day,could no surpass in one day-long. He usually educate me that the person must to be honestly,friendly to other,and working diligently. This is my father, I love him forever
求两篇描写人物外貌的英语作文（简短，初中水平）
My mother is a simple Chinese woman who has born in ~~~~~~~~, and is~~~~~ years old, but she will never be old in my heart. She has a cheerful husband and a clever boy. My lovely mother’s name is ~~~~~~~~~~. Firstly, my mother isn’t a beautiful woman, but she is the most beautiful woman in my whole life. She is a little fat. However, I love every part of her; my mother has a short bushy hair. At the same time, she has two lovely eyes and a charming smile. She always smiles even when she has some difficulties or is unhappy. My mother’s voice is like spring water through my body. What’s more, her body is likes a tree, a shadow to protect me. She looks like a tiger when I make some mistakes but she looks like a panda when I listen to her. My mother is a friendly woman, she always helped her friends or brother when they were in trouble, and also she never ever tells lies to her friends. My mother is a clever woman because she is a successful businesswoman, she didn’t have a lot of money when she was young, so she told me success depends on determination. She also is a conscientious person because she looks after me and loves her parents. She is the greatest woman in my mind. Friendly, honest, clever and great make up my mother’s personality. My mother is a good listener, she always knows about my heart. I admire my cheerful mother, because she is a successful business woman and takes care her workers. At the same time, she laughs a lot and makes us happy. If you met my mother, you would feel relaxed, I really admire that. My mother really enjoys shopping and travel. When she has spare time or spare money, she will go shopping with me. She really loves LV bags, but she always spends money on travel. She doesn’t like do exercises so she is a little fat. My greedy mother likes to eat chocolates but she should not eat so much! Sometimes, my mother is a decisive woman, if she wants to do something, nobody can stop her. Maybe she has belief herself, she not only thinks by herself, she also does it by herself. She told me this is right but often I didn’t agree with her. In addition, she works too hard, she always works until midnight so my father and me always worry about her. My mother is the most important person in my family. If my family lost her, we would lose a real home. She is our spirit support and air. If my family were without her, we would be like fish out of water. Overall, my mother is a simple woman but she also is the greatest mother for me. This is my mother whose name is~~~~~~~~~~.
描写人的英语作文（初中）约60词
英语作 英语作文的基本要求： 首先，一个段须有一个中心即主题思想，心由句特别是其中的题旨来表达。
整个段落必须紧扣这个主题（stick or hold to the topic），这就是段落的统一性（unity）。
其次，一个段落必须有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分展开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。
再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅（smooth），这就是连贯性（coherence）。
下面我们就对这三个标准分别加以说明。
1、统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。
请看下例： Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。
文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。
还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。
再看一个例子： My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。
卷面上如果这种句子多了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严重了。
2、完整性 正象我们前面说得那样，一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，如果只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实，就不能构成一个完整的段落。
同样，虽然有推展句，但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待，给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。
这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。
例如： Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression. 本段的主题句是段首句。
本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。
什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平静）Physical work又如何能改变这种情况
为什么它能起therapy的作用
读者得不到明确的答案。
因此，要达到完整就必须尽可能地简明。
例如： It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it. 段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法，必须有具体事例加以验证。
上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些解释，整个段落内容空洞，简而不明。
如果用一两个具体的例子的话，就可以把主题解释清楚了。
比如下段： It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming Help? 3、连贯性（coherence） 连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内在的逻辑性，后者指的是使用转换词语。
当然这两者常常是不可分割的。
只有形连而没有意连，句子之间就没有内在的有机的联系；反之，只有意连而没有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。
1）、意连 段落中句子的排列应遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就写什么。
如果在下笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一气呵成的好文章来。
下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。
A．按时间先后排列（chronological arrangement） We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day. 本段从“rose”（起床）写起，然后是吃早餐（“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”），然后是“close to noon”，一直写到这一天结束（“By nine——”）。
B. 按位置远近排列（spatial arrangement）。
例如： From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land. 本段的写法是由远及近，从远处（“from a distance”）写起，然后“get closer”，再到（“ten feet away”），最后是“inside the pagoda”……当然，按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。
根据需要，也可以由近及远，由表及里等等。
C. 按逻辑关系排列（logical arrangement） a. 按重要性顺序排列（arrangement in order of importance） If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess. 这一段谈的是表达能力，它的重要性与职业，身份有关，从“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”，最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement） If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that sanguine and sanguinary mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply. 这一段谈的是a writer's carelessness，先给出一个general statement作为主题句，然后通过5个 ”perhaps”加以例证。
c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement） I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers. 本段的主题句是段首句，它仅提出一个问题：为什么两只猫会被搞混。
然后对两者进行比较，末句才下结论。
2）、形连 行文的逻辑性常常要靠适当的转换词语及其他手段来实现。
请读下面这一段文字并找出文中用以承上启下的词语： Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal. 本文中起承上启下的词语有两种，一种是转换词语（transitional words or phrases），另一种是起转换作用的其他连接手段（linking devices）。
前者依次有：first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有词汇105个，所使用的转换词语及其他连接用语共26个词，约占该段总词汇量的四分之一。
由此可见，掌握好transitions不仅对行文的流（smoothness）有益，而且对于学生在半个小时内写120个词也是不无好处的。
一个段落里如果没有transitions也就很难有coherence了.我们看下面一个例子： Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences. 本段中除了第6句开头出现一个起过渡作用的”it”之外，没有使用其他的过渡词语.这样，文中出现许多重复的词语，全段读起来也显得生硬而不自然。
如果加上必要的过渡词语来修饰的话，这一段就成了下面一个流畅连贯的段落： Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences． 4、有损连贯性的几种情况： 考生在写作中经常出现下面几种错误： 1、不必要的改变时态，比如： In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway. 2、不必要的改变单复数，比如： Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships. 3、不必要的改变人称，比如： Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge. 因此写作中，一定要注意时态，人称以及数的变化是否正确，要注意保持一致。
英语作文的书写格式 英文书写应符合书写规范，英文字母要写清楚、写整齐、写美观，字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称。
书写应做到字形秀丽漂亮，通篇匀称和谐。
写英文字母要掌握正确笔顺。
如字母i，应该先写下面的部分，然后再打点。
有的学生却按写汉字的习惯从上到下写，写快了，就会把点和下面的十笔连在量起，显得十分别扭。
字形t应为两笔。
不少人却将两笔合成一笔，看上去不像t，倒像l或是e，难以辨认。
另外，把r写成v，把q写成把g，把k写成h等等，都是中学生书写中常见的毛病。
不少人在四线三格的练习纸上书写尚有规矩，能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求书写，但在白纸或横线纸上书写，却显得十分幼稚拙劣。
字母或跳上跳下，或一律写成同一高度，占上中两格的字母与占中下两格的字母完全没有高低之别。
这些现象都要防止。
另外，书写时还要注意词与词之间要保持一定的距离，不能紧靠在一起。
字母之间的连写也应该按照习惯，不能随意乱来。
在一篇字数有限的作文里，我们还要注意尽量不把一个单词拆开移行。
万一要移行，则必须以音节为单位进行，如revolution这个词，依照音节移行的原则可以按re-，revo-, revolu-这几种方法移行。
在移行时，我们还应特别注意以下几点: 1. 单音节词不能移行，即使是字母较多的单音节词，如through等也不能例外。
2．缩略词如Mr.，Dr.等不能和后面的名字拆开移行。
缩略的专用名词如U．K.，U．S．A等也不能拆开移行。
3．时间、量度及货币单位应视为一个整体；不能分开移行。
如； 11：00P.M.应写在一行内，不能将11：00和P．M．分开移行；写38℃时，不能将38和℃分开移行。
4．由“年、月、日”表示的日期，如果必须分开移行只能将“月、日”与“年”分开。
如January 6，1980不能将January和6分开移行，但可以把January 6，和1980分成两行。
5．含双写辅音字母的单词，在移行时要将辅音字母拆开。
如better可拆成better，necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果双写辅音字母属于词根，后面又加了后缀，就不能将两个辅音字母拆开。
如drill加上-ing后构成了drilling，就不可以将它拆成成dril-ling，而只能拆为drilling。
例文： 1.宠物： A Talkative Parrot A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds. When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it said to her, Hey, lady, you are really ugly.” This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately: Hey lady, you are really ugly! The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again, the shopkeeper said. The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn’t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, Hey lady. She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. Yes? she answered in an angry voice. The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, You know. 2.人物： Elizabeth Bennet （伊丽莎白） The second daughter in the Bennet family, and the most intelligent and quick-witted, Elizabeth is the protagonist of Pride and Prejudice and one of the most well-known female characters in English literature. Her admirable qualities are numerous—she is lovely, clever, and, in a novel defined by dialogue, she converses as brilliantly as anyone. Her honesty, virtue, and lively wit enable her to rise above the nonsense and bad behavior that pervade her class-bound and often spiteful society. Nevertheless, her sharp tongue and tendency to make hasty judgments often lead her astray; Pride and Prejudice is essentially the story of how she (and her true love, Darcy) overcome all obstacles—including their own personal failings—to find romantic happiness. Elizabeth must not only cope with a hopeless mother, a distant father, two badly behaved younger siblings, and several snobbish, antagonizing females, she must also overcome her own mistaken impressions of Darcy, which initially lead her to reject his proposals of marriage. Her charms are sufficient to keep him interested, fortunately, while she navigates familial and social turmoil. As she gradually comes to recognize the nobility of Darcy’s character, she realizes the error of her initial prejudice against him. Bennet家庭的第二个女儿和最聪明和机智，伊丽莎白是自豪感和偏见的主演和其中一个在英国文学的最知名的女性角色。
她令人敬佩的质量是numerous—she是可爱的，聪明，并且，在对话定义的小说，她一样精采地交谈象任何人。
她的诚实、美德和活泼的机智使她在胡话之上起来，并且弥漫她的坏行为类跳起和经常恶意的社会。
然而，她的伶俐的口舌和倾向经常做仓促评断带领她迷路; 自豪感和偏见本质上是故事她(和她真实的爱， Darcy)怎样克服他们自己的个人failings—to发现浪漫幸福的所有obstacles—including。
伊丽莎白必须不仅应付一个绝望的母亲，一个遥远的父亲，二非常表现的更加年轻的兄弟姐妹，并且几位势利，对抗的女性，她必须也克服Darcy她自己的错误印象，最初带领她拒绝他的求婚。
而她驾驶家族和社会动乱，她魅力是充足保持他感兴趣，幸运地。
当她逐渐来认可Darcy’s字符的贵族，她体会她对他的最初的偏见错误
初中人物描写600字作文带赏析
我有一个既聪明又耐心的妈妈。
这天，我碰到了一道难题，绞尽脑汁都想不通，只好向妈妈求救：“妈妈，你过来一下，这道题我不会做
”正在忙着打扫卫生的妈妈听到我的求救，只好无奈地抱怨着走了过来。
“猪头，笨死了。
”妈妈虽然抱怨着，但还是坐在了我的旁边，“哪题啊，让老娘看看。
”“嘿嘿，这题这题。
”我立马屁颠屁颠地指给妈妈看。
妈妈看着这道题，眉头紧锁，手中的笔在草稿纸上“唰唰”的挥动着。
不一会儿，妈妈紧锁的眉头便舒展开来。
“猪头，这题很简单啊，你看啊，首先”妈妈滔滔不绝的详细地给我讲解起这道题来。
很快，妈妈便详细的讲完了这道题。
“嗯，这道题就是这样的思路，你老娘讲得不错吧，现在懂了吧
”妈妈一脸得意的看着我。
可我却似懂非懂地点点头，但很快又茫然地摇了摇头：“不懂。
”妈妈看着我，不禁一脸无语，但还是认命地又讲了一遍。
一遍讲完，妈妈再次看向了我：“这次懂了吧
”我按照妈妈的思路想了一遍，发现仍然一窍不通，便再次茫然地看向妈妈。
“你你也太笨了吧
你是猪吗
”妈妈见她讲了两遍我还是不懂，不禁有些恼火，但看我一脸茫然的样子，还是将心中的恼火压了下去，又换了一种思路耐心地给我讲了几遍。
这一次，我恍然大悟，终于明白了这道题的解题思路。
妈妈见我终于懂了，也不禁松了一口气，得意地说道：“哼，你老娘是不是很聪明很有耐心
”“嗯嗯，妈妈万岁
” 这就是我的妈妈。
有啥难题，找妈妈准没错
初中英语作文写人的
My best friendMy best friend is Anna. She is very friendly and outgoing. She likes chating with others. And she like helping people very much. Whenever you need help, she will try her best to give you an answer as soon as possible. We've been studying together for about ten years. We are best friends also because we have the same hobbies. We both like playing table tennis so we often play together on weekends. And we will go to the movies together if there is a good one. She's always my best friend.
关于初中描写人物的作文并带有旁批和评语
妈妈我一生的感动我有一位特殊的老师，她既不用教科书上课，也不用粉笔写字，但她却教给我好多好多东西，诸如孝顺、守信、坚强……（开头简洁，总领全文）我没有像学英语那样死记硬背，她教给我的东西，却在一次又一次的实践中，在一件又一件的事例中，学到了……孝顺，这是我首先学到的，也学会了。
当奶奶还在世的时候妈常买了大包小包的东西，带着我去探望奶奶。
每当奶奶看到妈妈时，都会用小脚颤巍巍的跑上来，眼睛也因为兴奋而眯成一条缝，微笑绽放在满是皱纹的脸上，是那么甜蜜，那么欣慰。
妈妈伺候奶奶的一举一动，我都看在眼里，记在心上。
我暗下决心，我也要尽一份孝心。
偶然一次，我发现奶奶很喜欢看书，而且特别快，用“一目十行”来形容还嫌不足。
奶奶猜透了我的心思，说：“傻孩子，我是在看图画呢
”噢，我明白了。
于是每当我去奶奶家时，都会画一两幅幼稚的画给奶奶看，使奶奶不会寂寞，奶奶总是对我说：“这孩子，真孝顺
”后来，奶奶不幸去世，妈妈常常暗流泪。
于是我记住了孝顺。
（语言描写细腻动人）守信，这是妈妈最大的亮点。
一次，我看到一本精品作文书，但没带钱不能买。
后来，妈妈说是星期天一定给我买，结果，天公不作美，星期天大雨倾盆，老天不停地“哭”，我想妈妈一定不会给我买了。
可是妈妈回来时手却拿着我喜欢的那本书。
啊
我明白了，妈妈怕“爱书如命”的我等急了。
所以才冒雨买来，我高兴又生气地问妈妈：“书又不会长翅膀飞了，您为什么不等雨停了再去买呢
”妈妈说：“书当然不会飞，但信用就飞了。
人活一世，最重要的是守信，如果不守信，以后谁还会相信你
”这一席话又使我对妈妈有了新认识，妈妈真是位好“老师”。
（普通事件，但生活感很强，很有感染力）坚强，是妈妈最突出的特点。
上初中后，妈妈开始给我讲述她的故事，她小时候很苦，家里穷，外公、外婆身体不好，她每天放学回家后，先做家务，然后再写作业；年轻时，爸爸在城里工作，妈妈在乡下，耕田、播种、收割，全靠妈妈一人操劳。
别说烈日炎炎的夏天，就是凉风可可的秋天，妈妈擦汗的毛巾都能拧下水来。
现在回想起来，真不相信那么艰苦的日子，妈妈居然能挺过来。
我要学习妈妈的坚强，敢于面对任何困难。
当然，妈妈教给我的还有很多——宽容、忍让、自信、体贴……妈妈——老师
这篇文章结构清晰，总分总的思路一目了然。
首尾呼应，突出文章主旨。
几个生活小事折射出妈妈的平凡和伟大，很真实的写出了妈妈用言传身教做好了我的第一个老师。
很清新有实在。
