
我后天将有一个英语演讲,希望高人帮我指点下演讲稿让它更精彩
1.what impress me most is the earthquake happened in 2008 ,which killed at least 68,000 people. and over 300,000 were injured.2.and 1 million left homeless.3.you will face the exactly same fate.4.We live in the same blue sky听起来有点别扭,太chinglish了,建议用live on the same earth.5.suffer改成sufferings6.we are never lonely改为we will never be lonely.May you a seccessful speech!:)
求:英文演讲稿精彩开头和结尾。
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谢谢
1.开头:Good morning everybody!It's my honor to speak here,and I am very glad to share my topic with you. Then today I'd like to talk something about......(大家早上好
能在这里做此次演讲我十分荣幸,也很高兴能跟大家一起分享我的主题,今天我想演讲的是......) 结尾:OK,thank you for listening,that's all.(好了,谢谢各位的聆听,我的演讲结束了。
)我参加过很多英语比赛,而这个是比较常用的,也能体现出你的修养,2.……honorable judges,distinguished guests,ladies and gentlemen,good evening!I feel really honored to stand here and make a speech.today I'm going to look together with you into this question:…… 尊敬的评委,尊贵的来宾,女士们,先生们,大家晚上好
能够站在这里进行演说,我感到十分荣幸。
今天我将和大家一起分享…… 3.Good evening, ladies and gentlemen, and welcome to the English Speaking Competition for ……First of all, please allow me to introduce myself 女士们,先生们,大家晚上好
欢迎来到………… 首先,请允许我介绍一下自己
求几篇很经典的英文演讲稿 不要太长了 我想背下来
Gettysburg Address 葛底斯堡演说 Fourscore and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth upon this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.Now, we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation or any nation so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battlefield of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field as a final resting-place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.But, in a larger sense, we cannot dedicate, we cannot consecrate, we cannot hallow this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note nor long remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us, the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us---that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion; that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain; that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom; and that government of the people, by the people, and for the people, shall not perish from the earth. 译文:87年前,我们的先辈们在这个大陆上创立了一个新国家,它孕育于自由之中,奉行一切人生来平等的原则。
现在我们正从事一场伟大的内战,以考验这个国家,或者任何一个孕育于自由和奉行上述原则的国家是否能够长久存在下去。
我们在这场战争中的一个伟大战场上集会。
烈士们为使这个国家能够生存下去而献出了自己的生命,我们来到这里,是要把这个战场的一部分奉献给他们作为最后安息之所。
我们这样做是完全应该而且是非常恰当的。
但是,从更广泛的意义上来说,这块土地我们不能够奉献,不能够圣化,不能够神化。
那些曾在这里战斗过的勇士们,活着的和去世的,已经把这块土地圣化了,这远不是我们微薄的力量所能增减的。
我们今天在这里所说的话,全世界不大会注意,也不会长久地记住,但勇士们在这里所做过的事,全世界却永远不会忘记。
毋宁说,倒是我们这些还活着的人,应该在这里把自己奉献于勇士们已经如此崇高地向前推进但尚未完成的事业。
倒是我们应该在这里把自己奉献于仍然留在我们面前的伟大任务——我们要从这些光荣的死者身上汲取更多的献身精神,来完成他们已经完全彻底为之献身的事业;我们要在这里下定最大的决心,不让这些死者白白牺牲;我们要使国家在上帝福佑下得到自由的新生,要使这个民有、民治、民享的政府永世长存。
英语演讲稿开头该怎么写才精彩
要有问候语(新颖的),和大家套近距离,请高手帮忙,谢谢
Good morning ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention please? Thank you very much. First of all, please allow me to show you a warm welcome in such a cold day. Today I'm going to ……希望采纳
求一篇5分钟左右 有趣的英语演讲稿。
要通俗易懂贴近生活、有趣。
幽默演讲——调侃自己(中英对照) 演讲者如何调侃自己作为一个演讲者,我从观众那只得到过两种抱怨:一种是我讲话声音太大了,他们无法入睡;第二种是我讲得时间太长了,他们无法一直清醒。
As a speaker, I’ve only had two complaints from audiences. One, that I talk so loud they can’t fall asleep. And two, that I talk so long they can’t stay awake.创新句子:你们或者睡觉,或者不睡,只要不打呼噜,我就接着讲。
作为一个讲演者,他的演讲总拿来和林肯的哥得堡演讲[一个著名的演讲]相比较。
当他演讲结束时,也有悲伤、眼泪和悲痛——特别是计划委员会。
As a speaker, he has often been compared to Abraham Lincoln delivering the Gettysburg Address. When he finishes his speech, there is also sorrow, tears and mourning ---- especially by the program committee.幽默注释:演讲者讲得太糟糕了,组织者哭得很伤心。
演讲结束时,宴会主人感谢你从繁忙的日程中抽出时间来——你泰然自若,优雅地点头微笑着,心里非常清楚你日历上唯一的事情就是就早餐后喝点咖啡。
Poise is when you finish your speech and the toastmaster thanks you for taking time out of your busy schedule to be a part of their program --- and you nod and smile graciously knowing full well that the only thing on your calendar is a little coffee from breakfast.幽默注释:一些老干部退休后没什么事干,有人请他参加一些活动,他还假装很忙,好象推开了很多事才赶去似的。
过去我演讲时常常会比较紧张,但那时我看到一条信息说如果你想象所有的观众都是裸体会有所帮助。
此时此刻,我站在这里想象着观众都是裸体,真的起作用,我不再紧张了,但眼睛有些疲劳。
I used to get nervous when giving a speech but then I read that it helps to think of the entire audience as being naked. And so, at this very moment, I’m standing up here imagining every one in this audience as being naked. And it really works. I no suffer from nervousness. Eyestrain. Yes.幽默注释:把观众想象成裸体,意思是我不怕你们,就不紧张了。
创新句子:大部分人站在讲台上都会有点儿紧张,我属于少部分人,我非常紧张。
我本人不自负——我简直不能告诉你们我是多么钦佩我这一点。
Personally, I have never been conceited --- and I can’t tell you how much I admire myself for that.幽默句子:他因为自己不自负,所以变得非常骄傲。
创新句子:我一点儿都不自负,我希望别人也这么看我。
我先用简单明了的英语演讲,以后我再翻译给律师听。
Let me put this into plain English. I’ll translate it for the lawyers later.幽默注释:律师总喜欢用复杂的语言,简单的话都听不懂了。
创新句子:我的讲话有三个版本,小学生版本,中学生版本,大学生版本,你是听小学一年纪版的,还是小学二年纪版的
如果你听过这个故事,请不要打断我,我就知道这一个故事。
If you’ve already heard this story, please don’t stop me because it’s the only one I know.幽默注释:就是你知道两个故事,讲故事前也可以这么说。
创新句子:我讲个笑话,如果你们听过,也希望装做没听过,我也这样照顾你们。
演讲就象给草坪浇水,如果有四分之一的水渗下去你就满意了。
Making a speech is like watering a lawn. You’re satisfied if just a quarter of it sinks in.幽默注释:有人打呼噜,有人说话,都是正常的,有四分之一观众听就不错了。
演讲开始时我们有一些共同点,你们不知道我要讲什么——我也不知道。
At the very start, let me just say that we both have something in common. You don’t know what I’m going to say --- and neither do I.幽默句子:即兴演讲的开场白。
创新句子:我不知道你们会不会喜欢我的演讲,我不知道我要讲点儿什么。
开始前我想告诉你们下面的演讲已经编辑成了电视节目,我现在少讲20分钟,我们能够及时赶回家看2台的节目。
Before I begin, I want you to know that the following speech has been edited for television. I cut 20 minutes out of it so we could all get home in time for the game on channel 2.幽默注释:放着现场不看,偏要回家在电视上看。
可能你们有些人知道我今晚出现在这里有两个原因:第一个原因是你们的计划委员会一直在设法寻找一个聪明、有趣、老练的演讲者,——他们找到了。
第二个原因是那个人病了,所以就打电话把我找来了。
As some of you may know, I’m appearing here tonight for two very good reasons. The first reason is your Program Committee was trying to find a speaker who’s intelligent, entertaining, sophisticated --- and they did. The second reason is, he got sick so they called me.幽默注释:一开始好象在说自己很牛,其实就是个临时替场。
创新句子:我认为我演讲很风趣,可为什么没人笑呢
有人有舞台恐惧症,我没有;舞台不会怎么样我,是观众快把我吓死了
Some people suffer from stage fright. I don’t. The stage doesn’t bother me at all. It’s the audience that scares the hell out of me!幽默注释:stage fright舞台恐惧症,而不是舞台吓唬我。
我们每个人都希望能在某一时刻把时钟拨回去。
如果我能够把时钟拨回去45分钟,我就是这间房间里最幸福的人,我把演讲稿落在厨房桌子上了。
At one time or another, I think each of us has wished we could turn back the clock. I know if I could turn back the clock just 45 minutes, I’d be the happiest person in this room. Because that’s when I left my speech on the kitchen table.幽默注释:自己上台前还在刻苦练习,演讲稿落家里了,讲错了希望观众包涵。
我不想吹牛,但上次我演讲时所有的观众都站了起来,他们再也没有坐下,直到走到他们的汽车那儿。
I don’t want to brag, but the last time I did this it brought the audience to its feet. And they never sat down again until they reached their cars.幽默注释:观众听他演讲,都站起来走了,他还在吹牛呢。
创新句子:我演讲时用一种平缓的语速娓娓道来,观众睡得很香甜。
如果我有点儿犹豫,你们一定要原谅我,这是我第一次饭后演讲——在卖当劳里冲我的小孩儿喊叫除外。
If I’m a little hesitant, you’ll have to excuse me. This is the first after-dinner speech I’ve ever made ---except for yelling at my kids in McDonald’s.幽默注释:自嘲自己演讲没什么经验。
创新句子:你可能知道我已经养成了饭后演讲的习惯。
我不习惯面对这么多观众演讲,让我鼓起勇气的一件事情就是我在谈论我最喜欢的题目——我。
I’m not used to speaking to such a large audience. The one thing that gives me courage is that I’m speaking on my favorite subject --- me.幽默注释:电视上老是邀请一些名人在那儿大谈自己,这些人开场可以这么说。
人们总问我为什么我戴顶10加仑的红色帽子(或者一些其它非常显眼的衣服饰品),我告诉他们那是我采取的积极现实的生活态度。
我知道不管发生什么事情,善良的上帝总在注视着我们。
现在地球上有60亿人,我希望上帝能从芸芸众生中一眼就挑出我来。
People always ask me why I wear a big red ten gallon hat (or some other very noticeable article of clothing) and I tell them. It has to do with taking a positive but practical view of life. For instance, I know that no matter what happens, the good Lord is watching over us. Then again, there are now six billion of us, so I want to make darn sure He can pick me out of the crowd.幽默注释:多么新颖的创意,戴顶绿帽子就想引起上帝注意。
创新句子:别再说谎了,趁上帝还没注意你。
如果你们允许我准备读我的讲稿,我有三个理由:第一,我记忆力非常差——其它两个原因我记不清了。
With your permission, I’m going to read this paper. I’m going to read it for three reasons: one, I have a very poor memory –and the other two I can’t remember.幽默注释:为自己忘词找好借口。
创新句子:我记忆力不好,我忘了把讲稿带来。
不必要的单词是精彩演讲的祸根,我再重复一遍…Unnecessary words are the bane of good speeches. Let me repeat that…幽默注释:这时候重复带来很好的效果。
创新句子:演讲时最忌讳重复,我再说一遍:千万不要重复。
有时候确实让人糊涂,你看见代表举起了胳膊,但你根本确定不了他是在凭良心选举还是在检查他的关节炎。
It did get a little confusing at times. If you saw a delegate raising his arm, you could never be quite sure if he was voting his conscience or testing his arthritis.幽默注释:有人举胳膊未必是在真心选你。
创新句子:选举时只要我关节炎不犯,我肯定会举手。
对不起,(从钱包里拽出一张纸币,象拿手绢一样,在上面打喷嚏,然后扔掉)如果说我憎恨什么的话,那就是炫耀。
Excuse me. (Pull a bill from your wallet, handle it as you would a handkerchief, sneeze and then throw the bill away and say) If there’s one I hate ostentation.幽默注释:炫耀吧,有钱人有炫耀的资本。
创新句子:我不想炫耀,有学问的人不爱炫耀。
你们都知道,在公司里我只要求员工三件事:诚实、正直和崇拜偶像。
As you know, in all these years with the company, I have only asked for three things from my staff: honesty, integrity and idolatry.
急需简单 精彩 生动的英语演讲稿
Good morning\\\/Good afternoon, teacher(s) and students: Today, my topic is why people like the readings of “Fantasy”. As the time goes, more people begin to like read books as an entertainment, especially novels. Among novels, most of the teenagers and a great many of adults prefer to read fantasy rather than any other novels, then here is the question, why does most of us like to read fantasy, in another word, what are the advantages of fantasy than other kind’s books and what is the thing that can allure us in the fantasies. To answer these questions, I’d like to begin with is the definition of fantasy. Fantasy, in the dictionary, means the creative imagination and unrestrained fancy, when it connected to fiction, it is usually characterized by highly fanciful or supernatural elements - “Fantasy”. Things above can prove one of the reasons why we like fantasy so much. It’s because fantasy can be anything, it can be a creature has three legs; it can be a wizard who can do spells. Fantasy writers can write whatever they want to write and which means there are no absolute limitations in fictions. They can write as interesting as they want, and they can write as magical as they want. In a word, fictions can help people to realize their dream that is one of the most important reasons that people like to read fantasy novels. And when I read a book, I always image the scenarios in the book. Do you do the same? I am wondering that most people like to imagine when we read book. And here comes another reason that why we all like fantasy so much, fantasy can give us a prefect unlimited space and time to imagine. Another thing which can support this reason is because teenagers don’t like old things and the nature rules, they always like to try new things and break the rule, they like to dream, also that’s what we called “cool”, “super”, “modern” etc. We all want to be cool, don’t we! Then read fantasy, read cool stuff and be a cool guy or a cool girl! Why not! And this is another most important reason. After answer above questions, here comes the main question, what is fantasy: as I said above fantasy novels are unnatural cool books, which gives us an unlimited space to image and to think. Fantastic readings are mainly based on science fiction, illusion fiction and other types. Here come several examples. One of the most successful one of the fantasies - famous Harry Potter is written in a very smart way. The reason way it is so famous is because it makes it like a true story, for young wizards have to go to a school to learn magic from old wizards. Also, they have department, government etc. That’s very smart isn’t it, and that’s what a fantasy should be like-seems like true but not true. Also the other reason that why Harry Potter is so famous is because it’s about wizard. Most of the fantasy books include wizard, witches, warlocks and monsters and well, that’s why it is called fantasy I think. All these characters are all prepared by the author and they all make the book very exciting. Like in the book 20000 miles under the water, super big octopuses are used. In Harry Potter, wizards are used, etc. Also one other important thing about fantasy is that it always use good guys and bad guys, and try to tell us meaningful things behind the interesting or funny stories, such as Harry Potter tries to tell you friendship is the best thing in the word, Secret land tries to tell you try hard and you will always win etc. “Fantasy” helps people to realize their dream in imagination world, which is impossible in real world, people can find lots of fun in fantastical space, which help people to relax pressure in real world, fantastical stories also, educates people in scientific knowledge and in ethical and social behaviors, but mainly, it is fantasy, simple but it’s magically magic! Isn’t it! Thanks for listening.
求一些名人励志英语演讲稿,不要太长的。
名人励志英语演讲稿Most people would like to be popular with others, but not everyone can achieve this goal. What is the secret to popularity? In fact, it is very si-mp-le. The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we stay in good shape and drewell. When we are healthy and well-groomed, we will not only look better but also feel better. In addition, we should smile and appear friendly. After all, our facial expression is an important part of our appearance. If we can do this, people will be attracted to our good looks and impressed by our confidence.Another important step is developing more consideration for others. We should always put others first and place their interests before our own. It's also important to be good listeners; in this way people will feel comfortable enough to confide in us. However, no matter what we do, we must not gossip. Above all, we must remember to be ourselves, not phonies. Only by being sincere and respectful of others can we earn their respect. If we can do all of the above, I am sure popularity will come our way.如何才能受人欢迎大部分的人都想受人欢迎,但是并非每个人都能达到目标。
受欢迎的秘诀何在?事实上是很简单的。
步骤一,先改善我们的外表。
我们得确保自己很健康,并且穿着体面。
当我们既健康又穿戴整齐时,不仅看起来更有精神,自己也会觉得好多了。
此外,我们要保持微笑并表现得很友善。
毕竟,脸部表情是外观很重要的一环。
如果我们能做到这一点,别人会被我们的美好外表所吸引,并对我们的自信印象深刻。
另一个重要步骤,就是培养对别人的体贴。
永远以他人为重,并把别人的利益放在自己的利益之前。
当个好听众也是很重要的;如此一来,别人才能很自在地对我们吐露心事。
然而,不管我们做什么事,绝对不要说闲言闲语。
最重要的是,要做自己,不要当虚伪的人。
只有对人真诚又尊重时,才能赢得他人的尊敬。
如果我们能做到以上几点,我相信受人欢迎是指日可待的事。
Strive for balance in life 努力保持生活的平衡by Brain Dyson 布莱恩•戴森(可口可乐公司总裁)Imagine life as a game in which you are juggling some five balls in the air. You name them----work, family, health, friends and spirit and you’re keeping all of these in the air. You will soon understand that work is a rubber ball. If you drop one it, it will bounce back. But the other four balls—family, health, friends, and spirit—are made of glass. If you drop one of those, they will be irrevocably scuffed, marked, nicked, damaged or even shattered. They will never be the same.You must understand that and strive for balance in your life. How?Don’t undermine your worth by comparing yourself with others. It is because we are different that each of us is special.Don’t set your goals by what other people deem important. Only you know what is best for you.Don’t take for granted the things closest to your heart. Cling to them as they were your life, for without them, life is meaningless.Don’t let your life slip through your fingers by living in the past or for the future. By living your life one day at a time you live ALL the days of your life.Don’t give up when you still have something to give. Nothing is really over until the moment you stop trying.Don’t be afraid to admit that you are lethan perfect. It is this fragile thread that binds us to each together.Don’t be afraid to encourage risks. It is by taking chances that we learn how to be brave.Don’t shut love out of your life by saying it’s impossible to find. The quickest way to receive love is to give; the fastest way to lose love is to hold it too tightly, and the best way to keep love is to give it wings.Don’t run through life so fast that you forget not only where you’ve been, but also where you are going.Don’t forget, a person’s greatest emotional need is to feel appreciated.Don’t be afraid to learn. Knowledge is weightless, a treasure you can always carry easily.Don’t use time or words carelessly. Neither can be retrieved.Life is not a race, but a journey to be savored each step of the way. Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, and today is gift…… that’s why we call it the present.想象生命是一种往空中抛五个球的游戏,你把这五个球分别取名为:工作、家庭、朋友和心灵,而且你要努力不让它们落地。
你很快会了解到工作是一个橡皮球,如果你让它落地了,它还是会反弹起来。
但是,家庭、健康、朋友和心灵这四个球是用玻璃做成的。
如果你让它们掉到地上,它们将会不可避免地遭到磨损,留下印记、划痕,摔破甚至碎落一地。
它们将永远不会跟以前一样。
你必须了解这个道理,并且努力保持生活的平衡。
但要怎么才做得到呢?不要拿自己和他人比较而贬低自己的价值。
正是因为我们彼此不同,所以每个人才很特别。
不要因为别人看重哪些东西而把它们设定为自己的目标。
只有你才知道什么最适合自己。
不要将最亲密的人视为理所当然。
好好珍惜他们,就像是你的生命一样,因为没有他们,生命将失去意义。
不要让你的生命总在留恋过去或是遥想未来中流逝。
如果你活在每个当下,你就活出了人生的精彩。
当你还能给予的时候别轻言放弃。
只要你不放弃,万事皆有可能。
不要害怕承认你并非完美。
我们正是藉由这脆弱的细丝紧密地联系在一起。
不要害怕遇到危险。
我们正是在冒险中学会勇敢的。
不要以真爱难求为借口而紧闭心扉。
找到爱最快的方法就是给予你的爱;失去爱最快的方法就是紧紧地守着你的爱不放;维系爱最好的方法就是给爱一双翅膀。
不要匆忙地走完你的一生,以至于忘了自己到过哪里,要往哪里去。
不要害怕学习。
知识不会成为负担,是你可以轻松携带的珍宝。
不要漫不经心地蹉跎光阴或信口开河。
时间与话语都是收不回来的。
生活不是一场赛跑,而是每一步都需要体味的旅程。
昨天已成历史,明天还未可知,而今天则是一份礼物:那就是我们为什么称它为“当下”(译注:此处是双关语present的另一个意思是“礼物”)的原因。
怎样写出一篇好的英语演讲稿,有什么要求吗
无论在学习还是工作中,我们都会接用到各类英语演小到课堂作业和工作,大到会议发言和职位竞选。
那么如何才能打造一篇精彩的英语演讲稿呢
下面笔者就以乔布斯2005年斯坦福大学毕业演讲稿为范本来具体剖析一下英语演讲稿的写作要点,帮助大家了解其基本写作要领。
结构清楚,逻辑清晰 由于公共演讲的听众一般有数十人甚至数百、数千人,再加上演讲环境的不确定性(比如观众的欢呼或者抱怨),演讲者最好在进入主题之后马上给出所讲内容的框架结构,使听众能跟随演讲者的思路,更好地预判整个演讲内容,以达到良好的演讲效果。
比如,乔布斯在2005年斯坦福大学毕业典礼上的演讲中,开篇稍微寒暄之后就进入正题:“Today I want to tell you three stories from my life. That’s it. No big deal. Just three stories.”听众马上能对演讲内容做出预判——今天会听到乔布斯谈三点,然后他们会关注具体是哪三点。
这种演讲就具备了“以观众为中心”的特质。
乔布斯在随后的演讲中分别提到,The first story is about connecting the dots.My second story is about love and loss.My third story is about death.由于演讲思路非常明晰,听众在听完之后也会记忆犹新。
当然,演讲稿在结构方面的逻辑顺序有许多种,乔布斯的这篇演讲是按照话题顺序和时间顺序来安排的。
除此之外,还有空间顺序,“提出问题——分析问题——解决问题”的顺序等。
大家可以根据不同演讲内容的需要来安排自己演讲稿的逻辑顺序和整体结构。
开篇出彩,吸引听众 演讲稿的开篇往往需要花费大量的功夫去设计。
在写作开篇时,演讲者需要结合听众特点、演讲场合和演讲主题等因素,争取在一开始就紧紧抓住听众的注意力和兴趣。
下面笔者就介绍一下基本的演讲开篇模式,供大家以后写作演讲稿参考。
演讲稿开篇的目的是吸引听众。
乔布斯在他的演讲稿开篇使用的是“关联话题与听众”的方式。
这是一种比较有效的方法,因为人们一般对自己的事情都很关注,和自己相关的事情也会格外留意。
乔布斯在演讲开篇说道:I am honored to be with you today for your commencement from one of the finest universities in the world. Truth be told, I never graduated from college. And this is the closest I've ever gotten to a college graduation.高度赞美斯坦福大学——这就是在与听众发生关联。
乔布斯就是通过这种方式让听众一开始就对自己产生好感或对自己的演讲内容产生兴趣。
当然,乔布斯还用了适当的幽默,更好地融洽了与听众的关系。
除了乔布斯的这种开篇方式外,我们还需要了解和掌握其他一些开篇方式:①指出演讲话题的重要性。
比如要做一场关于“英语演讲的艺术”的演讲,演讲者在一开始就可以指出该演讲对于听众今后的学习、工作将会有很大帮助,甚至可以给出一些数据和实例,让听众明白不听这个演讲将会是一个损失,这样听众就会乐于认真听演讲了。
②使听众感到震惊。
例如要做一场关于“生活方式与疾病”的演讲,开篇就可以给出一组极具冲击力的数据,让听众看到生活方式不健康将会产生多么可怕的后果,这样的震惊能够使听众快速调整状态,投入到听演讲中去。
③引起听众的好奇心。
演讲者可以在开篇指出一种特别的现象,听众出于好奇就会认真听演讲,想知道演讲者如何分析或解释。
④向观众提问。
演讲者可以在开篇提出一个问题,这样可以引发听众的思考,也会引导他们去听演讲者如何解答问题。
此外,也可以在开篇引用一段名言,或是讲述一个故事等,这些基本的开篇方式被无数的演讲证明是实用而且有效的。
观点明确,支撑有效 毫无疑问,在演讲稿中,主体段的信息量最大,写作量也最大。
如何清晰地阐释演讲者的观点或演讲要点,如何用相关事实有效地支撑演讲者的各个论点或要点,是演讲稿主体段写作时应该把握的关键。
乔布斯在斯坦福大学的毕业演讲中明确给出了三个要点:① The first story is about connecting the dots. ② My second story is about love and loss. ③ My third story is about death.为了清晰、有效地阐述自己想要表达的这三个要点,他运用了以下三种手段:首先是举例子。
乔布斯在演讲中用了大量的事例来说明他怎么对待学习、工作和死亡。
比如他说自己读书时旁听有意思的书法课程,这些课在当时对他没什么实质帮助,但是十年后在当他设计第一款Macintosh电脑的时候,这些东西全派上了用场,这个例子充分说明了他演讲的第一个要点——串起生命中的点滴。
另一个手段是引用。
乔布斯在演讲中引用了一些名言警句来阐述自己的观点。
比如在讲到死亡时,他引用了一句格言:“If you live each day as if it was your last, someday you’ll most certainly be right.”这句话表明了他对于生命和死亡的看法,使听众印象深刻。
第三个手段是数据支持。
在讲第二个故事——关于爱和失去时,乔布斯用了一系列数据来支撑自己的观点。
他说自己是幸运的,因为Woz and I started Apple in my parents' garage when I was 20. We worked hard, and in 10 years Apple had grown from just the two of us in a garage into a $2 billion company with over 4000 employees. We'd just released our finest creation—the Macintosh—a year earlier, and I'd just turned 30.数据很直观,能让听众更直接地认识和理解演讲内容。
结尾有“道”,画龙点睛 演讲的结尾往往需要起到“画龙点睛”的作用,要尽量做到意味深长、启发思考。
开篇和正文再好,如果结尾过于平淡,整个演讲的精彩程度也会大打折扣。
那么如何做到结尾有“道”呢
首先我们来看看乔布斯的这篇演讲稿,他的结尾比开篇更加出彩,采用的是“引文结尾”的方式,达到了引人深思的效果。
他在结尾说道:Stewart and his team put out several issues of the Whole Earth Catalog, and then when it had run its course, they put out a final issue. It was the mid-1970s, and I was your age. On the back cover of their final issue was a photograph of an early morning country road, the kind you might find yourself hitchhiking on if you were so adventurous. Beneath it were the words 'Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish.' It was their farewell message as they signed off. Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish. And I have always wished that for myself. And now, as you graduate to begin anew, I wish that for you. Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish.乔布斯不仅在演讲结尾引用了这句Stay Hungry. Stay Foolish(求知若渴,虚怀若谷),而且重复三遍,强化了听众的印象。
这句话后来也被广泛传播,被誉为该篇演讲的精髓。
除了乔布斯这种“引文结尾”的方式,常见的演讲结尾方式还有如下几种:①总结演讲。
对演讲中的各个论点或要点进行简单总结和梳理,加深听众的印象。
②强有力的陈述。
这种方式不同于引用他人之言,往往是演讲者自己的总结和心声。
一个非常经典的例子是Patrick Henry的演讲“Liberty or Death”。
他在结尾时说道:“Is life so dear, or peace so sweet, as to be purchased at the price of chains and slavery
Forbid it, Almighty God
I know not what course others may take; but as for me, give me liberty, or give me death
”③首尾呼应。
在演讲结尾对开篇提到的主题和重点进行重新阐述,这是体现演讲内在统一性的经典形式,值得借鉴。
为了更加有效地掌握文中讲到的写作演讲稿的要点,笔者建议大家做到以下三点:①多看。
多看一些演讲素材,比如名人演讲、演讲比赛优秀选手的演讲等,积累大量的一手素材;也有必要阅读一些关于英语公共演讲的书籍,笔者在此推荐Stephen E. Lucas的《演讲的艺术》(The Art of Public Speaking)一书。
②多想。
学会分析这些演讲之所以精彩的原因,可以从笔者上面讲的几点入手分析。
③多练。
在有了一定的积累之后,要大量练习写作演讲稿,话题可以从日常学习和工作中选取,这样练习起来会更有兴趣和成就感。
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