如何把“一路上有很大的变化”改为优美的句子
我的左手拿着你给的棒棒糖，右手牵着你温暖的手……说好8离8弃
帮帮忙把这句句子改优美一点，谢谢
海船是海鸥在海上移动的家,它让海鸥忘记了恐惧、忘记了危险、忘记了旅途的艰辛。
请帮我这个句子改的唯美霸气一点
绘画不是我赚钱的手段，而是我终身信仰。
待我富足之时，即是我重操画笔之日请采纳点赞
帮我改作文，有错误或有更优美的句子帮我改改~
I'm a Korean born in Canada, I had been living in China for ten years and I'm now living in Taiwan. I immigrate a lot because my father is a missionary. I have three brothers, the eldest one is studying at a college in Korea while my other brothers are living here. I would like to talk about my hobbies now. I usually spend my freetime playing basketball with my youngest brother, we woulld spend two to three hours playing the game. Without realizing, time does fly when we are playing basketball. I wish to play basketball with a foreigner in the USA someday. 我只是稍稍修改了一些句子，或许不是很专业但还是希望能帮到你。
