银行员工参加新年团拜会，有一段一分钟讲话稿需要润色（附原文）
我已经进入农商行186天7小时58分，尽管不是很长的时间，但我的心灵却得到很大的感悟。
曾经的我在柜台外，觉得里面的世界很小，容纳不了我高远的理想，而现在,我来到了这个看似很小的世界里，却发现原来它很宽广，足以承载我的梦想，带我走向远方。
即使，我只是巨大世界的一个微小人物，但我始终相信自己，能在小小柜台上做出大服务。
我谢师宴的演讲稿，麻烦高手帮我润色，补充一下。
Playing basketball is one of my hobbies.It has been my favorite sport for several years. Initally, it can help me keep fit.It is also good for the growth of my frame.Secondly,it can help me learn the way to cooperate with others.In modern society,teamwork is even more important than individual ability.What's more,it can train my react capability, which can help me in studying。
Moreover, it can reduce the pressure of studying.Reading is my another hobby.When I'm tired or bored,I start to read books .Reading leads me to a world without the limits of time and space.It can take me to anywhere I want to vist such as the black holes and ancient Egypt.It can also teach me a lot.Most of my knowledge is acquired from books. In addition,I can even chat with giants and learn their thoughts on philosophy,science and so forth.Furthermore,I can get the power to go on studying by reading.Playing basketball and reading have been parts of my life.I'll never forget to do them.
求大侠帮忙润色一下演讲稿
When I was a schoolchild, my dream was to be a engineer. However , when I told parents my ambition, they thought it was ridiculous and said that engineer is not suitable for a girl, which made me very angry. I argued with them and said I would follow my dream to do what I really liked and they didn't need to worry about my future. A few days later, my teacher told me that there was going to be a math competition and I should prepare for it with my father’s guidance. I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time .Suddenly I realized I had told my parents that I din’t need any help from them. I had to make a hard choice that I would either break my promise and ask them for help, or prepare for the competition by myself. I burst into tears. I don’t want to lose my face to ask for their help, though I knew that the competition was really important to me. The reason why I didn't do so was that not only would it lose my face but also they would never take my opinions seriously. So I chose to meet the challenge by myself. Every time I came across the difficult problems, I was helpless and din’t know who I can turn to. But I made up my mind not to give up. I devoted all my time and energy to do exercises and give up all the parties. Finally I came first in the contest. All my devotions were paid off.I knew the importance of the competition because it was a good time不明白此句要表达什么意识not only
