求把这篇英语演讲稿改的通顺一点，中文翻译改好点。
。
。
诸位学生，诸位教师，下午好
由于整个世界中充满了边界，我们的生命中，限制和自由并存。
我不奢求绝对的自由，因为不可能。
我只不过有一个梦想来支撑我的生活。
我很高兴与你们分享我的梦想。
我的经历大不同于其他的女孩。
当她们在家里玩玩具、梦想成为公主时，我的梦想是做一名老师。
改到这里，发现英中文都有问题。
英文句子不通，中文对不上。
你说改中文翻译
那到底是以英文为标准，还是以中文
如果是以中文，那整个英文翻译需要换，就也说不上改“中文翻译”了。
日语演讲稿帮忙改一下，这个是百度翻译的
............这已经めちゃくちゃ了..你还是重写的好吧..不会的可以问别人求指导.百度翻译的就太......那个了
麻烦看看那英语演讲的演讲稿对不对，请帮忙改改更通俗点。
这是百度翻译弄得。
肯定不好。
In my opinion, the most important challenge is not external factors. The most serious challenge to China's rise is legal faith of citizens.··factors是复数形式，那么主谓一致原则，challenge也应为challenges此外，最重要的挑战直译为the most important challenge 不妥，既然上句有提到挑战，那么这句大可改为 the most challenging one\\\/ the most challenging ones are...··legal faith 前加定冠词 the-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Ancient Chinese Confucian said, Inequality rather than want is the cause of trouble. . 古代中国儒家有句话，“不患寡而患不均“。
改为 As the saying of ancient Confusionism goes: Bigger a trouble might be caused by inequality than insufficiency.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Adjusting various social relations through the operation of the law, to achieve fairness and justice and efficiency.通过法律的运行调节各种社会关系，实现公平正义与效率的兼顾。
这句话缺少谓语动词可改为： Equality and efficiency can be achieved at the same time by using law to adjust and operate all kinds of social relations.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------在中国古代，立法和司法屡受各种社会等级的影响。
法律运行过程中充斥着恣意的法外施刑和对于权贵的姑息。
因此，在中国古代国民所更希望和仰仗的不是法律，而是权力和金钱。
二者得到的越多，也就越能凌驾于一切国家规则和公序良俗之上。
In ancient China, legislation and judiciary are frequently affected by social classes. Overly intensive sentences and unreasonable leniency for the wealthy prevailled in the judicial process. Therefore, what the ancient Chinese chansed were not laws, but power and money. The more power and money they have, the more likely that they would override rules, orders and moral.
高手帮改改英文演讲稿
making our voice heard As the saying goes, silence is gold, but as far as I am concerned. It doesn't suit us any more. Nowadays, in order to make yourself well-understood, in order to show yourself, the most important thing you need to do is: make(建议改为making) your voice heard. We are living in a big world in which a person is as tiny as a seed. If you keep silence(改为silent), it will take others a long time to notice you .don't be always waiting .the chance won't knock at your door itself. You need to find it and seize(seek更好) it. So , tell people what you think and what you feel, which will make them get to know you little by little through your words. Tell them what you want ,only in this way can you satisfy your needs well. Of course , there are hundreds of thousands of ways you need to make your voice heard. But sometimes ,in some ways, you can make yourself heard. Even though it may be tiny, but it is rather useful. And even help you a lot. In many occasions actions are not so clear as words. to express your feelings, to say it our(改为out) is the best way. don't keep the people who you care about waiting long , don't be shy to let them know that you love them so. I believe some of you don’t know how to do it. And feel that it is rather hard to say out. Here is my suggestion that you could follow. Say thank you to your parents and teachers, say I love you to your lover, say I 'll stand by your side to your friends ,and then you 'll find that you understand each other better and you love each other more. That's the power of words. So why don't you make your voice heard? May be you don’t feel confortable at that time, that’s because you seldom show your love to them. You might hold the view that they know my love. But how are you sure so(后加上of that)? Today, I am standing here, to show you that, we all need the courage to stand up and make our voice heard. Yes, I should say that I’ve just do(改为done) it. And the most important thing of all is:everyone here has heard me! So please don’t be shy, stand up and make your voice heard.写得不错,可自己大声读出再更改一下.
求高手修改英语演讲稿，并准确无误地翻译
From the ancient time till now ,the precious cultural heritages ,such as festivals, cultural relics, legacies are tradition culture for us who live in a modern society.Undoubtedly，as to the culture,protecting is the priority.As long as we protect the valuable chinese tradtions well,then we can smriti it.However,we shoud smriti the tradtion in the way that select the essence and discard the dross.纯手写，望采纳。
高一水平的英语演讲稿，帮忙改一下
Do you know the Rubik's Cube? It's also named magic square.It was invented by Dr. Rubik who taught architecture in a university in Hungary.There are 6 sides in different colors on the magic square.There are 6 center cubes.These cubes can not move, and the 12 edge are made of another 12 small cubes.And the last 8 small cubess are on the corners.If you want to turn any floor of the cube, you must destroy other sides.So you may turn the magic cube in many different ways.In fact, there are4325200327448989856000 different kinds of possibilities.If you can turn the cube 3 times each second and you will spend 454200000000 years getting all kinds of possibilities. This is about 30 times the age of the universe. But don't worry.There are many lows and ways to recover the cube.And you can find the lows and ways by internet. There are many ways to play the cube.You can race with others, who then compared the recovery of the first Rubik's Cube. Created the world's fastest recovery of the Magic were only a 7.08s.You can also play it with only one hand or even with feet or without looking. To do a good thing, the preparatory work is very important.'d Like to play good to have a good Rubik Cube, it is easy to spin, not stuck, and so on. I have my Magic 18 yuan a month to use the money to buy . If you want to buy can LET ME KNOW. And then I will be satisfied with the price I have to buy you. If you want to know more about the magic cube.You can surf the internet. Where you will find what you want.纯人工翻译,望答案如君所求.!
